Name: Lightning Release: Thundering Destruction Technique
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Type: Genjutsu
Range: 1000 feet
Description: Hand seals; The user claps their hands together after they finish their hand seals, the clap sounds like an ear splitting clap of thunder right on the battle field. This triggers the illusion and with the addition of raiton chakra a blinding flash of light spreads out to make the follow up appear more realistic. The flash of light fades after a few seconds to reveal to all those that could hear the clap (everyone within 1000 feet) the very realistic illusion that everything has been destroyed around them and they now stand in a barren wasteland with the caster standing where they had been looking at them. The caster is free to move around while their opponent's roam confused while the image of themselves fights without causing real damage though the affect person thinks that every time they get hit by the illusion it is really happening. Those affected also stand still, while they can move about freely within the illusion the physical body is stuck. The illusion of the wasteland and the false caster lasts for two rounds. The illusion can be avoided through the use of ear plugs. Those affected are unable to use sight or sound to track down the caster while this is in effect as the illusion is both sight and sound based in it's use. After use of this technique the user has until the illusion fades to leave the topic, this is a requirement (to exit the topic) not an option. In addition the user cant attack or harm people during the illusion.

1000ft in radius or diameter?

How fast does this travel? Speed of sound?

1000 foot diameter and yes the speed of sound

Alright, you say you are able to move around. Does this mean you are able to attack the opponent?

Technically yes however I have a specific use for this technique that may help keep cost down. This will give me a means to escape a topic if that need arises, as this is the case I am willing to slip in that after use I am required to leave before the technique ends and can't attack anyone during that time. Savvy?

Very well. Please add that in.

done

Before I approve and price this, would there be anyway for one to escape or avoid this? My idea would just be earplugs and yes I'm dead serious.

Earplugs could stop it I spose, though they would need to be purchased Id think and we would need to monitor for metagame blocking.

Alright then. Please add that in. We will need to discuss about the earplug thing with the other staff members.

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Takeshi wrote:

Name: Destructo Disc
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 100 feet
Description: No seals; rather than seals the user builds up chakra in their palm for the same time they would normally be doing hand seals for a B rank jutsu. During this charge up time the user is required to take a wide stance and can not move. The user takes all the chakra they built up and form it into a disc of energy three feet across, they then release the disc to fly straight forward in a fast paced bee line. The disc moves at a speed of 50 mph, when it hits something it is like being hit by a small car going the same speed. The disc has the power to slice through iron and lower grade materials while being able to dent steel on impact, this means it can slice through a human body like butter. This technique has a cool down of seven posts.

The Wide Stance:

Purchasing this for 9k, ryo deducted

Name: Shura Senpūken (Tornado Fist - 修羅旋風拳)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Touch
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra into their arms by rotating them in a circle for as long as they would normally charge a B rank jutsu. After charging the user's fist has a rapidly spinning funnel of wind that extends from down near the user's elbow to right around their knuckles are. This mini tornado is the offensive part of the technique, if it comes into contact with someone's exposed skin it has the level of power to cause lacerations one to two inches deep depending on how close the target gets. The main ability of this technique is pushing the opponent back from you, this is accomplished by doing a normal punch or just almost landing a strike. When the user gets within six inches of their intended target they can choose to release the tornado, the effect being that whatever was in front of that tornado in a 100 degree angles is blown backwards fifty feet along with receiving one inch deep cuts. Things bolted to the ground or that have deep roots (like trees and bushes) are not moved and things over 300 pounds are unaffected by the push back but still receive the lacerations unless they are tougher than iron. This technique has a variation called the double tornado fist, as the name suggests it creates two cyclones (one on each wrist), this can only be done if both arms are charged up at the start, doing this costs and additional 20 chakra. The cyclones can last up to three posts before fading away or being stopped early by it being released. 7 post cool down.

Tornado Fist:

Double Tornado Fist:

I see nothing wrong with this. Approved 7000 ryo

purchasing this now then, ryo deducted

Name: Tornado Exploding Fist
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Fuuton / Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Touch
Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra into their arms by rotating them in a circle for as long as they would normally charge a B rank jutsu. After charging the user's fist has a rapidly spinning funnel of wind that extends from down near the user's elbow to right around their knuckles are, within the area of this funnel of wind is a bright blue and yellow and makes a loud electrical crackling sound. This mini tornado is the offensive part of the technique, if it comes into contact with someone's exposed skin it has the level of power to cause lacerations one to two inches deep depending on how close the target gets, due to the heat of the electricity these cuts are cauterized instantly. The main ability of this technique is attacking the opponent with a powerful explosion emitted from the wind funnel, this is accomplished by doing a normal punch or just almost landing a strike. When the user gets within six inches of their intended target they can choose to release the tornado, the effect being that whatever was in front of that tornado in a 100 degree angle (and within twenty feet) is caught in an explosion that causes third degree electrical burns and cauterized one inch deep cuts. The cyclone can last up to three posts before fading away or being stopped early by it being released. 7 post cool down.

Tornado Exploding Fist:

Approved. 8000 ryo

Ill be buying this now then by taking the money from my alts, ryo deducted.

Name: Hiraishin (Lightning Rod - 避雷針)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Hand seals; the user after completing their required hand seals raises their non-dominant hand above their head and a bolt of lightning strikes down and hits the user. This lightning bolt is more powerful than a normal lightning bolt, able to fry a human's internal organs and can melt through any armor. If someone is hit by this they will almost defiantly will die within seconds. Once per topic.

So...I think suicide is stupid...but whatever man Yo choice.
1500 Ryo

Alright then, Ill purchase this now. Ryo deducted.

D-rank tech shouldn't be able to kill. This should be S-rank.

New price: 20,000 - 1500 = 18,500.

EDIT:

New price: 16,000 - 1500 = 14,500.

Well considering this kills "the user" it was already good enough though it has been discussed over the phone with Dom before you decided to involve yourself. Your comments are unneeded here.

Jutsu denied.

He hasnt even made my edits that I told him to make yet. Give him time to remake it, and you'll see that it will be plausible.