Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (shadow clone technique)
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Description: The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Using this technique a ninja is able to create anywhere between one and four clones at a time.

Name: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Multiple Shadow Clone Technique)
Rank: A
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Description: Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is an advanced variation of the Kage Bunshin Ninjutsu technique which was banned by the First Hokage. This has not stopped many Jounin-level ninja from learning the technique however. Instead of creating several clones, several hundred clones are created. Like normal Kage Bunshin a ninja's chakra is split evenly among the clones when created.

Kage Bunshin 70000 ryo

Tajuu not allowed.

Tenzou wrote:

Kage Bunshin 70000 ryo

Typo? o_O

Name: Shotgun Fist
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Description: Taking a handful of sand or salt in one's fist they clump it into a loose ball and launch a powerful punch and the materials fly out a few feet and then explodes from force inside the mass causing the material to spread outward with enough power to open up milimeter scratches on the opponent's exposed skin. This is more of a defensive technique to push the opponent back rather than use for offense.

Shotgun Fist Approved. However, E Rank pricing Im not sure how its being done or if its still free.

Name: Hagane no kurōn
Rank: B
Element: Steel
Type: Clan Jutsu / Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Description: Similar to shadow clones in many aspects the Hagane no kurōn or Steel Clones function with almost all of the same properties. They can be created out of metal nature chakra from members of the Kinzoku clan of at least A rank and above while anyone else will require some form of metal to be around and instead of creating the clone just shaping it into a mirror image of themselves with the ability to act freely. These clones as stated before are similar to kage bunshin except that as they are crafted out of metal chakra. For a clone to be destroyed there needs to be a certain number of taijutsu attacks landed on it, the system for that is as follows; Genin, 4 hits, chuunin, 3, s. Jounin and jounin 2, s rank 1 hit assuming they are direct and powerful strikes. So then since a clone has to be an even distribution of chakra to create, it won't have a full amount of chakra. Therefore it would only be able to perform a certain rank jutsu before being destroyed. I say it can create one A rank jutsu before being destroyed on its own. B rank two before self destruct. C & D rank 3. In addition the clone can use any raiton, steel or neutral element techniques the user themselves could. Max clanes created in one use is one.

Ok. This was similar to a zodiac jutsu I created. However, bc the clone could do so much, it was 50,000 ryo. Just by looking at it, the steel clone would be near 75,000+ ryo bc you can create three. I would say reducing it to a single clone to cut the price a bit. Then we will talk about the abilities further.

Alright then I knocked it down to one, lets talk business about the rest I suppose

Well if your an S Rank, that means it would require an S Rank taijutsu to destroy it. That may be a bit much. Maybe a system of how many hits it takes to destroy. Genin, 4 hits, chuunin, 3, s. Jounin and jounin 2, s rank 1 hit?

Sorry for me being dumb, what are neutral elements?

Genin, 4 hits, chuunin, 3, s. Jounin and jounin 2, s rank 1 hit - that system seems perfectly fine to me assuming they are direct and powerful strikes

and its not a big deal Dom, neutral element techniques are techiques that dont actually have an element like the academy jutsu.

Ah ok. So then since a clone has to be an even distribution of chakra to create, it won't have a full amount of chakra. Therefore it would only be able to perform a certain rank jutsu before being destroyed. I say it can create one A rank jutsu before being destroyed on its own. B rank two before self destruct. C & D rank 3. for combinations, maybe for every 1 b rank, it reduces it to only being able to use 2 c or d rank. It'll have to run out of chakra eventually so this system is needed.

Lastly, it needs a Cooldown.

Alrighty it looks like we are getting near the end here

Lets say the cool is set to 4

Ok. Edit everything within the description and I will approve and price..

All fixed up

Sage mode: World Serpent
In this Sage mode, the user's skin hardens into thick scales that cover his entire body, and and all hair on their body falls out but is instantly regrown after the transformation is ended and normal form is once again taken. The user grows in height to well over eight feel tall and their eyes glow a bright orange. To show a complete transformation the teeth of the user will lengthen and their jaw will become unhinged.


(Maximum of 3 post charge. Per 1 post charge = 2 posts in Sage mode.)

Advantages:
The user's physical strength, speed, stamina, and durability dramatically increase, to the point where they could fall face first into a bed of spikes and receive no injury whatsoever.

The user's ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu become more powerful.

The user can harness the natural energy surrounding them, turning it into an extension of their body, and increasing the reach of their attacks.

The user gains the ability to sense chakra around them.

Disadvantages:

In order to gather enough natural energy to initiate the transformation into Sage Mode, the user must remain perfectly still. Because of that, the user can be an easy target for an opponent.

Because the user needs to move during combat, the Sage chakra cannot be replenished, which means the user can't stay within this state for extended periods of time.

The second and third weaknesses mentioned above can be bypassed through the Sage Art: Amphibian Technique, where one Sage gathers chakra for another.

After Sage Mode has ended, the user appears to experience exhaustion.
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Name: Sage Mode
Rank: -(Presumable S)
Element: N/A
Type: Senjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: Sage Mode is the result of using natural energy along with a ninja's normal chakra in perfect balance to drastically empower a ninja's abilities. Senjutsu (仙術, Sage Techniques) refers to a specialized field of jutsu that allows the user to sense and then gather the natural energy around a person. Senjutsu practitioners can then learn to draw the energy of nature inside of them blending it with their own chakra (created from spiritual and physical energy within the shinobi), adding a new dimension of power to the sage's chakra, resulting in the creation of "senjutsu chakra" (仙術チャクラ, senjutsu chakura). This chakra cannot be seen by anyone other than those who have been trained in senjutsu. This new chakra enables the user to enter an empowered state called Sage Mode, which can then drastically increase the strength of all ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu. A person who is able to use senjutsu is called a sage (仙人, sennin). It would seem that it stems from the toads of Mount Myōboku, as only Shima, Fukasaku, Jiraiya and Naruto have been seen using it. Gamakichi and Gamabunta also seem to be familiar with it. A prerequisite to being able to use Senjutsu is that the user must have a great reservoir of chakra themselves in order to manipulate the natural energy.

Hagane no kurōn - 20000 ryo (Sorry, forgot to price this..)

bumped for time skip

Takeshi wrote:

Name: Hagane no kurōn
Rank: B
Element: Steel
Type: Clan Jutsu / Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Description: Similar to shadow clones in many aspects the Hagane no kurōn or Steel Clones function with almost all of the same properties. They can be created out of metal nature chakra from members of the Kinzoku clan of at least A rank and above while anyone else will require some form of metal to be around and instead of creating the clone just shaping it into a mirror image of themselves with the ability to act freely. These clones as stated before are similar to kage bunshin except that as they are crafted out of metal chakra. For a clone to be destroyed there needs to be a certain number of taijutsu attacks landed on it, the system for that is as follows; Genin, 4 hits, chuunin, 3, s. Jounin and jounin 2, s rank 1 hit assuming they are direct and powerful strikes. So then since a clone has to be an even distribution of chakra to create, it won't have a full amount of chakra. Therefore it would only be able to perform a certain rank jutsu before being destroyed. I say it can create one A rank jutsu before being destroyed on its own. B rank two before self destruct. C & D rank 3. In addition the clone can use any raiton, steel or neutral element techniques the user themselves could. Max clanes created in one use is one.

Approved, add it to your inventory

Name: Canto Tuono
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Element: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu / Clan
Range: short-medium-long
Description: Hand Seals; Canto Tuono is the ultimate raiton technique for the Kinzoku clan and has several very specific requirements. To start, this justu requires that the caster be struck directly from a natural lightning bolt from the sky. Then after the hand seals are completed the electrical energy is released back into the clouds and the avian shape is formed over the course of two rounds, during these two rounds no other jutsu can be used or else the technique is cancelled. The "lightning phoenix" is nearly half a mile in wing span and just as long for body length. The bird can move at speeds topping the speed of sound and stores enough electricity to disintegrate almost any substance it makes contact with. After it touches something it transfers all that electricity into it and then it explodes.

Spoiler:

Name: Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Element: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Short-medium
Description: A genjutsu which exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, stealing all light away. A world of darkness, as if a thick, jet-black curtain had been dropped. No matter how skilled someone is, they have no option besides turning into sitting ducks. This effect allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses. In essence, the opponent can sense, hear and smell out the user of the technique and break its effects by landing one hit on the caster.

First one: Any weaknesses as to how the target would escape?

Second: Approved, 6,000 Ryo

hmm, lets see. How about if I add in that if during the two post that it is forming in the clouds I can't spill my blood or else it is countered completely?

that would knock it down to 4,500

sorry I didnt realize you had posted and was rethinking it. What if instead of spilling blood I make it so I can use no other jutsu in those two posts?

hmm..4,000 is lowest I can go : P

I added in the jutsu line to the rai tech