Ok edit that in. After that, ill price the first 3 jutsu.

Alright i edited

Phoenix Aura - 15,000 ryo

Twin Blaze Destruction - 4,000 ryo

Lion Palm - 12,000 ryo

Alrighty then i added two more jutsu.

Element channel - no jutsu can add to your chakra pool. this is a no.

Golden Eyes - Is this a doujutsu and kekkei genkai? I dont follow the explanation

Alright what if im just shannel it out into the skyy or something

Its just basically repeling jutsu and sending it back at the original user its and yes KKG Doujutsu.

Hmm, est let Kashaku look at it then, he is more physics based than I am. If he doesnt respond in a day or two, Ill continue on without him..

Will do

Sorry to double post i just want to see what the deal is about the jutsu

Golden Eyes: I'm gonna say no to this jutsu affecting jutsu above the user's rank. And maybe some kind of drawback for casting the jutsu back on the opponent using just your eyes. Temporary blindness, maybe?

Element Channel: Even if you fail, you only recieve 5% of the damage? That's a big no. Also, if you can channel it into the sky, what's to stop you from channelling it back at the opponent? So, also no to redirection.

1: I guess blindness would be fine {2 posts}

2: Any way i could change it to make it approvable or just change it all together

Golden Eyes: That's fine. Go ahead and add that in

Element Channel: None that I can see. You may just have to switch it out for something else.

Edited

Golden Eyes: If it's a doujutsu for your KKG, it really should've been included in a clan, not turned into a jutsu... Just saying.

As for Repulse, it seems to have only one level of power, since it can push an opponent back 15 feet. Does this mean that if the opponent is 14 feet away from you, you push them back one foot?

Yeah i know

and noo they still get push back 15 more feet

Golden Eyes will have to be looked at by an admin or Tenzou...

And Repulse needs a definite range.

ok

and it dosnt already?

21 feet is too far for Repulse...

17 feet or 19 at the most

At the least, I need range gradients, so you won't be able to claim that a D-rank has a range as far as the A-rank one.

Is that whatcha ment

Yes, that's what I meant, but D-rank-B-rank are all too far-reaching. A D-rank jutsu shouldn't be able to create enough "oomph" to push someone 16 feet away a total of 15 feet backwards. You'd just coat your body with ten chakra and blast every 16 feet away? No sir.

Is that better

I still think it reaches too far. I'd consider D-rank six feet, and that's pushing it...

hmm alright hows that