okay then add that in, and Ill post my understanding here for comfirmation.

It launches from your hand/finger and shoots out at only a few inches at most wide then after fifteen feet it grows to fill an area 20 feet long and forty feet wide. If Im right just say so cause that dimension is all good.

Does this attack do any damage past the burns? Cause I know in canon this level of Cero rapes bitches up the ass, if you arent wanting that so price stays down just say so.

yeah that's good.

LOL um besides the impact and the explosion in the gif. im good

Okay, for technicality tell me how powerful the impact and explosion will be and this should be good to go

About the force of a rhino at half speed.

Add it in

Edited

The Cero is approved and priced at 10k

Do me a favor and re-post your other jutsu on this page so I can more easily review them now

Thank you, now to get someone to check my cloud style

Nami wrote:

Name: Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
Range: 25 ft from user
Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously.

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Is there a charge time since you are adding in ninjutsu? Also go more into the power level it can deflect since its a C rank.

Nami wrote:

Name: Cloud-Style Flame Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon {Manga}
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
Range: 25 ft from user
Description: The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, such as Atsui, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously.

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Is there a charge time since you are adding in ninjutsu? Also go more in depth about the power level.

Nami wrote:

Name: Cloud-Style Front Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
Rank: D
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
Range: 25 ft from user
Description: The user slashes forward to attack an enemy.

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So its a D rank tech to swing your sword? Does it do anything else?

Nami wrote:

Name: Cloud-Style Reverse Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon (Manga)
Rank: C
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
Range: 25 ft from user
Description: The user does a powerful spin, generating the momentum needed to slash at any opponents behind them. The user can also utilize this spinning motion to trick an enemy that's in front of them. The enemy is fooled into thinking the user will attack them, but instead the user attacks the targets behind the user.

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So its a C rank tech to let you spin around? Anything else?

1) Eh I suppose a 2 post charge time at the least, and can deflect C ranks and below.
2)3 post charge, on contact 1st degree burns and temporary numbness in that are for 2 posts.
3) Yes basically just slashing and sending a fuuton wave at the target.
4)This is also just sending out multiple fuuton waves(8) in different directions

Name: Dragon Blood
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Hand contact
Description: The seal was created by sesshomaru to help a man he meet while visiting the village of kusmargakure. The man by the name of Nami was having a complex dilemma, not being able to release his weapon's ability. Shesshomaru decided to help him out and place a seal upon him that is compatible with the sword, allowing the sword to release its abilities. In order to release one ability the seal must be given 10 chakra this must be done repeatedly in order to release the rest. Each ability last 5 posts the only alternative is if all three abilitys are released all at once then they last 8 post all together.

Sesshomaru is the only one who can break this seal, due to the fact that he uses his spirit half to create it. As long as Nami has this Juuinjutsu, Sesshomaru can control his will by the force of a single word. He says 'sit', and Nami is forced face first into the ground no matter what the circumstances. Sesshomaru can even go as far as fighting using Nami's body as a medium. He can completely control his body in every way. Nami is basically Sesshomaru's bitch...
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(I'm posting this in here, because it will be put on Nami in the next 3 posts or so in our topic. All it needs is an approval from you Tak, since you handled the seal in Sesshomaru's Jutsu Registration. After he approves this Nami, this Fuuinjutsu will have to be put in your Technique list.)

seal approved

Bump for Cloud style

1. Make sure you specify it cover the area in front of you only since it's a crescent not a circle. The charge time sounds good and it can deflect D rank fire and C rank everything else

2. Sounds good

3. Okay then describe this wave in size and power

4. Same as above times 8 I guess

1) Edited
2) Alright, price?
3) Edited
4) And Edited

1. 3000
2. Make the actual edits for burn levels and stuff
3. 2000
4. 3500

Alright edited the final one, thanks Take

flame - 4500

Name: Sonic Rainboom
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-A
Element: Raiton + Fuuton
Type: Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Description: In order to build up the proper chakra needed for this technique the user charges raiton style chakra into their legs for speed and fuuton style chakra into the rest of their body so that they lose most of the wind resistance in addition to creating the void of space behind them which creates the imagery effects described later. Chakra is balanced at a 30/70 raito between lightning and wind styles so it can only be performed by shinobi with higher than usual chakra control, thus this is limited to Special Jounin and higher rank shinobi, anyone with a lower rank would be completely unable to achieve the effects of this jutsu.

The sonic rainboom is nothing more than a massive burst of speed in a beeline direction but if performed as a supplementary addition to another technique it can become fatal to those that encounter it. The level of speed achieved depends on how much chakra is pumped into the technique. Onlookers can tell how powerful the technique is by how many colors are released in the rainbow trail left by the user as they dash forward. For the first color the user must exert 20 chakra points, for every additional 3 colors (with a maximum of 7 colors all together including the first) the user pays an additional 10 chakra. so one color takes 20 chakra (C rank), 4 colors is 30 (B rank) and all 7 costs the user 40 chakra (A rank). The user charges the raiton/fuuton chakra through their body for the same length of time the normally would for the rank of the jutsu they are using.

After the user has charged the chakra into their body they take off with a massive burst of speed straight forward. At first no colors are seen as what is called a mach cone forms around them, normally the mach cone is unable to be seen by the human eye but since this is a chakra enhanced mach cone it is clearly visible in front of the user (refer to the included image for more details). As the user runs the mach cone gets tighter and tighter around them until they reach max velocity (running a distance of thirty feet) the light behind the user explodes in a massive eruption of chakra and depending on how many colors (the rank used) appear the user gain a burst of speed as well as a trail of the colors following them as they beeline for a maximum distance of one hundred feet straight forward. The user is unable to turn while using this technique.

# of Colors	Speed Increase
One	2x
Four	3x
Seven	4x

While the jutsu itself only grants the user a burst of speed there is also the effect of what will happen if the user slams their body into an opponent. This is of course determined by the number of colors gained through use of the jutsu. The chart used to determine the damage is as follows;

# of Colors	Damage Level
One	Severe Bruising
Four	Broken Bones
Seven	Organs Ruptured

*The user will receive damage equal to one rank lower in damage, however for the level where only one color was gained the user just feels a soreness on the impacted area.

This jutsu is only able to be used one time (safely) in any single topic with a cool down of six posts.The user can use it once more for a second attempt and do it successfully but they will feel completely exhausted and will be unable to move the round after, No one can use this jutsu more than three times in any topic.

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Ok Nami, Tak and I talked a little bit about this jutsu and we have come up with a few things to change.....

We discussed that MPH would not be the best way to go about this jutsu, but instead a stat boost instead.

Also, we think that the nin/tai and nin/ken all in one technique is far two much for one jutsu and youll have to split it up into two separate jutsu.

We also proclaimed it to be A rank, instead of B.

Once you clear up those things on it, bump and we will continue the process...

I already took everything we discussed and made a new version of the jutsu. I PMed it to Nami this morning

Takeshi's version edited in

Bump for SRB
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Purchasing

Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading
Cloud-Style Front Beheading
Cloud-Style Flame Beheading

Total Ryo: 9550 Ryo
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New jutsus

Name: Eagle vision
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 ft
Description: Those who possessed the gift were able to instinctively sense how people and objects related to them, which manifested as a colored glow, much like an aura in a person's mind's eye. For both Eagle vision and sense, the same variety of colored glows was used to mark different people or objects. Red indicated enemies or spilled blood, blue indicated allies, white indicated sources of information or hiding spots, and gold indicated targets or any person of interest.

Name: Eagle Sense
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 30 feet
Description: When an individual learned to master Eagle vision, the ability evolved to the more advanced Eagle Sense. This heightened all of the senses of its user, allowing them detect the heartbeat of a target in the area, or even foresee a target's path. For both Eagle vision and sense, the same variety of colored glows was used to mark different people or objects. Red indicated enemies or spilled blood, blue indicated allies, white indicated sources of information or hiding spots, and gold indicated targets or any person of interest.