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 Drendi's Wrath Blade

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PostSubject: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptyThu Dec 25, 2014 5:42 am

Name: Drendi's Wrath Blade

Drendi's Wrath Blade Light_sword

Type: Sword

Rank: S rank + experience bar- once fulfilled, you could possibly merge the item.

Quantity: 1

Description: A blade that almost emits pure speed, it cracks the air with a simple swing. This sword is made of a titanium copper alloy, making the blade strong, sharp, and extremely conductive... this allows the blade to

Abilities: Enhancements: Speed, can take lightning based jutsu or even natural electricity and either: flow electricity through it the blade, release electricity into the recipient as struck, fire a powerful bolt of lighting through the tip of the blade that reaches thirty feet that extends in range by another thirty if coming in contact with a conductive surface and also extends by sixty if the surface is water as water is super conductive, or the wielder can sheathe the weapon with the lighting holding in the blade, when released the blade will fire a shock-wave in a horizontal crescent shape in the direction faced. The speed boost is dependent on the wielders BLM to the Hecoro Clan for as long as the wielder has the blade unsheathed, should the blade be broken, the substance is replaced by electric chakra from the wielder, implying that the wielder must have lighting nature chakra to some extent, the strength and durability of the lighting replacement substance will be based on the wielder's rank in Lighting chakra, if the wielder does not have enough lighting chakra, the weapon loses all attributes until repaired and the wielder gains such chakra. However, if the wielder does not have any BLM to the Hecoro Clan, the blade is just a blade without any effects.

History: Drendi was always the most hateful of the six founders, she didn't care for men or how women were treated, she was also not one for human interaction outside of the clan and when she didn't have to.... she really didn't like people at all. When she was dying she was in battle... she put all of her chakra into her blood soaked blade... the blade changed in form and retained her hatred. Like all of the Hecoro clan items that they pretty much use as their graveyard, the blade holds it's own personality... as it is filled with chakra, it lives and speaks to the wielder... it's rather sarcastic actually... and very happy to serve... almost too happy.


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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptyFri Dec 26, 2014 3:36 am

Agility & Dexterity are not stats we use here. Endurance, Strength & Speed yes. You need to specify how greatly the item increases the statistics & a chakra cost for the duration of the ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptyFri Dec 26, 2014 6:08 am

Alright, updated, anything wrong now? (had to get five words in)
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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptySat Dec 27, 2014 5:56 am

A weapon with an ability like this, would require a Kenjutsu specialization & the rank of the speed would be affected by the user's BLM rank as well as have a chakra cost per post.

Also- you need to elaborate on " can take lightning based jutsu or even natural electricity and use it however the wielder wishes." This is very vague, vague means loopholes & possible abuse in ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptySat Dec 27, 2014 12:18 pm

gave the uses for the electricity, made the BLM adjustment you suggested, and i'd say that it more than enough makes up for it's own rank :3
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Drendi's Wrath Blade Left_bar_bleue190/190Drendi's Wrath Blade Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptySat Dec 27, 2014 10:41 pm

Like the glove, make a jutsu for this item. The user's ability to create blades of lightning would be an actual jutsu, you can't just swing and get free attacks.
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PostSubject: Re: Drendi's Wrath Blade   Drendi's Wrath Blade EmptySun Dec 28, 2014 3:05 am

I know that there hasn't been a more recent edit for this, so I'm going to chime in with some other information.

You description has been cut off it seems. Probably occurred during editing. I'm sure this will be fixed when able.

The experience bar thing, I don't get it. Is it something to do with the clan itself? The reason I ask is because there really is no actual rank higher than S as far as creation goes. So this function may be better to rework to be a bit more active.

Absorption of jutsu. Now this is something we try to be a bit heavy on grading. There has to be a standard set rank of which you can adsorb. I would say B rank, and up to A once your BLM is A and ken is at least B. S rank will be a no go.

Natural electricity is something you can't really place on a ranking list. So based on how you use this is a bit iffy. Try to detail it a bit more.

Stat increases, chakra costs, activated effect, all of these need defined amounts, set stats, what those effects can do, sizes, ect. The speed also can't be entirely based on your BLM stat. The reason for this is because if your natural speed stat isn't at least within 2 ranks of the enhanced speed stat, then that is going to place an abnormal strain on your body. I would have a scaling between your BLM and SPD stats to better scale this effect. That way you also can't manipulate the stat system to gain one of the most effective stats, by leveling another.

Sub-note: Another note that should be made is you say lightning and natural electricity. Make it based raiton chakra. Also make sure to not confuse natural energy and electricity. Natural energy would be considered under the same aspect of senjutsu, which you would not be able to adsorb or control, especially without the senjutsu stat. Same would be applied with raiton based senjutsu techniques. Since they don't use natural chakra, I would exclude them from the list, until noted otherwie.
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