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Kouri Ten'nou

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PostSubject: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyTue May 21, 2013 3:28 am


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First Name: Isais
Middle Name: Aeneas
Last Name: Soriano
Alias: Bringer of Mischief

Gender: Male
Age: 18
Height: 5”11”
Weight: 165lb
Birthday: March 18
Sexuality: Straight
Relationships:N/A

Affiliation: Hyougagakure
Rank: Jounin
Element: Fuuton, Suiton, Doton
Specialization: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Fuuinjutsu

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Personality: Isais is a hard headed individual with a knack for strategy and mischief. His personality has been said to have changed over time. Being with Sonya in the past has proven that Isais is also very sensitive to many things though most of them are not noted. One being the signs of injustice and a few others originating from that very theme as well. Overall Isais is a laid back individual who wants to have fun.

Likes:
Isais likes compliments and praises from his peers. Isais enjoys competition and opportunities to utilize his strategic mind. Isais also enjoys rootbeer and junk food as he is a young teenager and has teenage desires. Isais also likes people who are much like himself, in which he considers being Style Oriented, Ambitious, Intelligent, Seductive, and Persuasive.


Dislikes:
As mentioned before, Isais hates signs of injustice. He detests bullying and unfair competition. He also detests a traitor and hypocrites. Isais will not tolerate any of these things as they serve as his vices and will trigger a side of him, which he prefers to remain dormant.

Motivation:
Isais Neomae is a very intelligent individual who is motivated by spend his time studying people. He has been noted to show interest in human psychology and is one of the brightest kids of his age. Isais learned quickly what it means to work hard and be an independent. When he is not working, he is often found training on jutsu and martial arts. Though he started the academy at a very young age, Isais isn't a student in which the professors worry about, they know for sure that with his ambitious attitude and endless thirst for knowledge, he will succeed and become a splendid ninja.

Fears:
Isais having the Gobi to taunt him on a daily isn’t one to be afraid of much, but much like any human being Isais does have a fear of something. Isais fears rodents for they are the most disgusting disease carrying creatures in Isais’s opinion. He is also afraid of the Gobi’s massive power as he feels that the Gobi will bring out endless possibilities for destruction throughout the nation that his former lover once referred to as the good mother.

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Gobi no Ei

Bloodline Name: Gobi no Ei

Bloodline Ability: The jinchuuriki of the Gobi has the innate ability to use a special taijutsu involving the knife-hand technique, a move that can make defense difficult due to the decreased wind resistance. In chakra cloak mode, the knife-hand technique can be done more quickly, and the user's body seems to have less air-resistance (speed 1.5x normal). In one-tailed mode, the jinchuuriki can move even faster (2x normal speed) and their taijutsu becomes even more devastating, able to bruise bone. In two tails mode, the jinchuuriki's cloak causes their bodies to become more sleek and covered with a small amount of protective mucus that allows them to slip out of an opponent's hold easily. At third-tail, the jinchuuriki can now move 2.5x as fast, and the knife-hand technique is strong enough to break small bones (the ribs), and are able to use their chakra tails to stab as well as their hands. At fourth-tail, the jinchuuriki is actually able to perform incredible acrobatic attacks, the knife-hand can actually break most bones, and the jinchuuriki can move at 3x their normal speed. At fifth tail, the jinchuuriki becomes the Gobi, and now use their tails to be able to pierce clean through the human body. They can also fly long distances, and can flatten their bodies to become nearly invisible.

Location: Hyougagakure

Clan History:
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History:
Isais Neomae: Tales of a Jinchurriki

In the beginning there were men, and men with power. The world was run by these men of power, and the man with the most power commanded the majority, and the man with the less commanded the minority. In an attempt to change the course of their history men have been known to do inhumane things. During the time of the great tailed beasts, villages would offer up human beings as vessels for these creatures. Some people offered themselves up as a sacrifice for their villages; some saw this as an opportunity to gain power and others were forced. This tale follows a boy names Isais Neomae; who migrated to hyougagakure for a better life. Originally from the mountain country this family was forced to move to the blizzard country because of the failing economy. The family endured many changes, having originated from a democratic nation and transitioning to a monarchy.

Once arriving to Hyougagakure, the Fubukikage knew of their arrival and was in need of a host for the newest bijuu at their disposal, the Gobi. The Neomae family was forced to pledge their allegiance to the throne through by presenting their older son, Detsuji as a vessel for the Gobi. The family had to endure living with a jinchuriki and risk losing their only son to the will of the village. Since that say Detsuji became the center of attention to his village and family. Many in the village hated him and called him demon, while his family adored him and showed him love. At times Isais was often forgotten by his family and buried under the shadow of his older brother. In the village, those who detested Detsuji would judge him but completely ignore Isais as if he never existed. At age six, Detsuji was sent off to the academy for basic ninja training. Isais was also sent to the very same academy to be there for his brother. Those eight years at the academy was hell for Isais, and no more of a picnic for Detsuji.

At age fourteen, Detsuji was recruited from the academy for special training. This training was known as tail beast training and was suppose to help Detsuji master the beast within. During the tailed beast training things went horribly wrong and Detsuji, was killed by his instructor. When the Neomae family heard of this, they were broken. Despite their grief they insisted that Isais be the next jinchuriki. Out of rage and detest for Hyougagakure they had hoped that Isais would become compatible and capable of completing the tailed beast training to avenge his brother and destroy the nation. But they’re act of treason was quickly discovered due to their impatience and attempt to assassinate the king. They were sentenced to death and Isais’s life was spared simply because he was the carrier of the Gobi and at the time Gobi seemed more compatible with him.

Isais on the other hand became filled with hate for the village. As most Jinchuriki are out casted from their villages because of the demon inside, Isais was a different case. The village loved him and marveled at his resiliency towards the beast and praised him, but Isais repaid their love with hatred. Isais vowed to himself to that he would become the end of this village. As Isais got older he was given the option of undergoing the tailed beast trainings. Isais knowing what the consequences were has delayed every tail beast training scheduled. Instead Isais began to train himself to become strong. This way of thinking had taken Isais far, for he was one of the few Genin who had been promoted to Chuunin by request of the king. During this season in Isais’ life he met a beautiful woman by the name of Sonya.

She was particularly talented in utilizing weapons. She would utilize them in such a way that they would set of traps which would rain down various other weapons. Because of this they referred to her as Red Rain. Isais at the time was an average chuunin and he fell in love with her. The two had a very unorthodox relationship where there was lots of love but no physical contact. The two were nearly inseparable and at the time made the greatest tag team hyougagakure has seen. Isais developed a strong knack for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu combinations and with that Isais was capable to taking on close range foes while Sonya rained hell on long distant targets. This team became a very helpful part to the nation doing missions throughout and getting paid chuunin salary. Unfortunately citizens of the kingdom began to abuse their famous service and the Fubukikage whose hell bent on having Isais use the power of the Gobi would send them on every mission assigned with complete disregards to their level of fatigue and current health. The two went from becoming fellow shinobi of the village to being paid slaves to the needs of the nation. Because of this Sonya eventually fell in battle and it cost her life and nearly claimed Isais’ life as well. Through her sacrifice and possibly the intervention of the Gobi, Isais woke up in the hospital after receiving medical attention.

As Isais laid there he fell into a deep depression, blaming the village for all his sorrows; he would soon remember Sonya’s will. She loved the village with all that she was and referred to the village as, the good mother. Sonya didn’t have a mother when growing up and her father was very strict, she often spoke of how the mothers of the village would take care of her as if she was their own and that is what molded her view of Hyougagakure.

Every time she accepted a mission or did anything in the name of the village, she said that she was honoring and protecting her good mother. Knowing this, Isais could not bring himself to hate the village anymore. If he was to hate, he would have to be more direct, he would have to hate the fubukikage. Isais was always known for being wise, for if anyone would catch word of his hatred, he would be spending his days under heavy supervision, a lot more than he already has. So every time he was done an injustice, Isais would play it off as if he knew not. When it was time to vent, Isais would do so in the form of training and mischievous pranks. These pranks of his took strategy and escaping fast, although most of the time Isais would allow himself to be caught in the act just so a villager would know that he was the one who caused them grief. Because of his knack for running away, Isais had appealed the Gobi’s taste and it wasn’t long after that the Gobi would begin to speak with Isais. This did not necessarily mean that they were friends, but they kept each other company. At times Gobi would help him come up with a way of escape when the pranks got too complicated. This is how Isais gained the reputation as the bringer of mischief.

He became one of the most innovative shinobi to be brought up in hyougagakure. Isais mostly uses his mischievous nature as motivation for his techniques and storytelling. Isais’ love for the village has grown stronger as he became older and had the opportunity to work with children and the elderly of the village. He has learned that misery isn’t only a foreign thing, or a Jinchurikin thing, but a global commonality which makes people who they are. He also learned that misery is ended when someone willingly dies to themselves and their desires for the sake of others. Because of this Isais found favor regardless of his countless pranks, and began to accelerate quickly throughout the ninja ranks. Because of his inherited passion, Isais only spent a short time as a special jounin and doing countless missions that were deemed beyond his rank, years, and pay roll. It was as if Isais himself was a tailed beast. Now Isais is of the Jounin rank and the village is pressing him to complete his tailed beast trainings. The chuunin exams are at hand and the other Jinchuriki throughout the world are said to be far more advanced in their training than Isais is.

Isais promises that he will protect the village that Sonya once called the good mother, in hopes of becoming the new Fubukikage and changing its course for the better. In the meantime we follow Isais, a man who lost his family and lover to the injustice of the village, but by love is sworn to protect the village. How can he avenge his loved ones and protect the village at the same time. We’ll have to find out but in the meantime Isais has dedicated his time to training himself and writing books. Until the day comes where he has to make the decision, Isais will serve his village with honor, pride, and integrity.

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Shinku had successfully fled and Aiden was left to face this beast. Aiden would be successful with most of his attempts, but find himself puzzled when the head which he had placed the seal on, became useless for about half a minute and then regained full control. From that observation Aiden began to figure that his attacks do take effect on the beast but so long as one head remains, the fallen will return. Aiden needed a plan B if he is to survive this confrontation, but doing so would be difficult if he cannot buy himself enough time to think. By maneuvering and jumping about, Aiden would climb to the top of the head in the middle and use chidori stream to shock the entire body of the Hydra, buying him a few seconds to think of his next couple of moves.

By the end of the stream of electricity he would stand there as the heads bow from shock and become distracted by the sight of Shinku’s ship sailing off in the distance. A smile would slightly come up but fade just as quickly when he came to grips with the reality of being stuck on this island. Just as he made the realization the hydra and its entire group of heads would wake up and overcome their shock, without Aiden even realizing that the heads were in motion. When Aiden finally snapped back into his current situation four of the heads were facing him and with a thunderous roar, Aiden was caught in between four extreme blasts of air. The intense blasts would completely cause the fifth head to explode, and for a few of Aiden’s bones to break. From a high; Aiden came crashing to the snow, as the Hydra sets its eyes out towards the boat in the distance. The Hydra could not move because of its lower half being submerged in snow. The Hydra would attempt to blasts waves and bijuu bombs towards the ship, but every time would be a miss. Meanwhile the unconscious Aiden would be covered in blood, merely three feet away from the Hydra. While unconscious, Aiden would dream of the life he had before he made the biggest mistake of his life. He remembered being one of the best warriors in his father’s militia at age 16; along with his best friend, Zaseraf. Things were simpler then, but as a trouble maker he found a way to screw it all up. It seems as his trouble making has put him in one bad situation after another, and it wouldn’t take much for him to back track and find how he deserved this. If it wasn’t for the attack on his own village, shinku wouldn’t have to save anyone, and if shinku didn’t save the village, he wouldn’t have been a hero, and this festival wouldn’t have to happen, and no one would have had to be on this island. This wouldn’t have been the case if Aiden would have stuck to one side of the fence, being both a hero and a trouble maker couldn’t possibly end well.

Aiden regains consciousness and finds the hydra desperately trying to hit the ship, Aiden managed to pull himself onto his feet, despite the pain and began to load an intense amount of raiton chakra into his right hand. Once again it seemed as if Aiden’s bloodline kept him well equipped to withstand such a powerful attack, making his body as hard as diamonds. It didn’t take long for the whistling of Aiden’s signature chidori frost to catch the attention of the Hydra beast. Aiden had a plan and was more than ready to see this through; the hydra would now turn its rage and attention towards Aiden who is loading his chidori frost a bit more than he usually does. Aiden would stop holding his right wrist and allow the right hand to wield the chidori frost while imitating his left hand which is now stretched out like the wings of an eagle. The hydra would notice a surge of electricity going throughout Aiden’s body. While becoming impatient and uninterested in the outcome of Aiden’s preparations the hydra would prepare itself to load a bijuu bomb but just as it started its preparations 5 ice sculptured demons, the same ones from the attack on hyozangakure would attack the hydra along with a barrage of floating ice weapons aiming for the hydras eye. The hydra would be thrown off by the incoming attacks and release miniature bijuu bombs at one of the actively moving Ice sculptures. Upon impact that one would explode as the hydra would attempt hit the others and some of the incoming projectiles with sonic waves. The hydra would succeed on destroying the other four ice sculptures which were about B rank in strength but fail to remember the incoming weapons, which would gauge the beast’s eyes out. By this time Aiden had completed his move and was now engulved in what appeared to be a lightning bird. Within the lightning bird a shadow of a man, with his right hand looking claw like could be seen. The Hydra would scream in pain of its eyes being gauged out, but that would be nothing compared to what was going to happen next. Aiden made his move, running towards the beast as fast as he can screaming, “Chidori.. Legacy!” .

As he says this he runs up the hydra, freezing and incinerating its entire lower body, and as its lower body came crashing down; while in mid air Aiden would be seen holding his chidori frost in his right hand as he attempts to penetrate and freeze the heart area of the beast, and with his left hand place a sinister seal on its wound. By then the hydra had restored its eyes only to see Aiden’s final blow to cause its entire body to turn into ice. It took only seconds for the four heads to become purely ice and smash against the snow below. Aiden too would land, being unable to move much due to yet another massive output of chakra. Aiden found that he could barely even maintain his third stage for any longer. Being forced to reduce to the second stage of his bloodline, he was more than grateful that he had killed the hydra. He would laugh a bit, which would only cause him more pain as he starts to feel more pain from his broken bones. He would speak to himself out loud as if the person he is speaking to could hear him, “ Hey dad… I did something that you never could. I beat a god and lived.” As Aiden spoke to himself the forest which he had created would quickly vanish, causing the waters from about 6 feet away from Aiden to return. The hydra was soo heavy that it would break away some of the ice platform that Aiden was on and sank to the bottom of the ocean. At this point Aiden could not swim and he is about 7 meters away from shore, so he calculated that as long as he can keep his second stage on, that he will not drown, due to every drop of water about five feet from him turning into ice. Aiden would close his eyes a bit, trying to rest and regain some chakra, but as he closed his eyes he would think about the last couple of moves. It didn’t take long for Aiden to realize the flaw; His first move was to blind the hydra so that he could finish his preparations, and surprise the hydra with the attack, which was a success. The second part was eliminating the lower half of the hydra with the chidori akuma, which was also a success due to its lightning properties. But the problem lied in the chidori shimo attack. Aiden could recall seeing the rejuvenation of the hydra’s eyes by after hitting the hydra in the heart with the chidori shimo. If the chidori shimo had done the desired effect that he had wished, the heart of the beast would have been frozen instantly and he wouldn’t be able to regenerate, assuming that his perception of the beast is true. But if he was able to regenerate then that means that his chidori shimo didn’t go deep enough.


As Aiden makes this realization a large mass immerges from the water. Turns out that as Aiden froze most of its body, the center and back side of its upper half was not frozen, and before the hydras heads could completely freeze up, it already began to regenerate the fifth head that was blown off earlier. The sinking of the body gave it enough time to regenerate its lower body alone with four new heads making the hydra appear as unharmed as before. The hydra would rise and become overcome with laughter as it laid its eyes on a helpless Aiden, laying on a platform of ice. The hydra would tease as it would let the platform slowly move closer to shore. “ You tried soo hard to defeat me, in the end you would done much better for yourself if you would have placed that same effort in running away.” Aiden would then look at a tattoo like symbol on his right arm , and struggle to lift his left hand to grab it, but as he tried, he would fail. It seems like his body has become too heavy for himself. The hydra continues, “Your ice techniques are reminiscing of the ones who had trapped me in a block of ice for an entire year. It was foolish of them to think that they can out live me, but most pathetic of them to only last a year after sealing me. They left your kind no chance of surviving me, the only thing that Hyozangakure will inherit is my wrath! Your kage avoided me today, but I will claim his soul as my own soon enough.” Aiden would be puzzled by this beast and begin to ask questions while attempting to grab his right shoulder once more. “ I’ve never heard of you before, how is it that you have history with my village?” The hydra would stare down at Aiden then continue, “It is true I have not seen your face before. Such bravery, I would have met you before. I am what your village refers to as the hydra, about a year ago on this day a war happened here, between myself and half witted demon referred to as the kraken. i would have annihilated that creature if it wasn’t for your power hungry village, interfering with our battle. In the end the kraken fled, and I was sealed by the elders of your village to spend 8 lifetimes in a giant iceberg. I don’t think that even the elders themselves would have known of my short sentence. My bet is that they had been murdered by someone within your village. Upon the death of the last elder I was set free.” Aiden would reply after failing again to reach his arm, so instead he would left his eye patterns shift. “No one in the village knew that we had such a creature trapped in an iceberg, if anyone did it would be the hyozankage himself. If so he would have informed us. “Aiden would then have a flash back to his action figures and recall that one of the figures looked just like the hydra. “ We’ve been set up. I don’t get it, why would he sacrifice his entire village? Wait a minute” Aiden would recall everyone escaping from both sides, and as he was about to climb aboard he noticed shinku in the distance trying to fend off the hydra. “Shinku was the only one left behind. But why? Was he attempting to use the peace treaty and the death of shinku to control both hyozangakure and kazangakure? He couldn’t have possibly planned that.” The hydra would laugh and ask Aiden a question, “Nate River, is your kage?” Aiden would try to recall his kage’s name, but cannot recall the name Nate River. “Near is my kage.” The hydra would burst into loud laughter as it became evident that he knew something that Aiden didn’t, he would say, “You were dealing with a very dangerous man, unfortunately for you, that will be all ill ever tell you.” The hydra continued laughing as red would glow from his mouth again, indicating the coming of another bijuu bomb. Aiden wouldn’t be able to survive this one but to his look, the hydra would blast the bijuu bomb up ahead towards a loud screech of a bird coming up ahead. Within seconds, what would be a phenomenal sight came to be; both the eight tails and the kraken had arrived to kill each other. Aiden would not stand a chance and would definitely die in the cross fire, but with his last attempts Aiden does something that he might one day be grateful for or soon regret. his eye patterns stopped shifting and he makes a copy of the sinister seal that’s on his right arm and guides the copy so that it lies on top of the ice platform near his left hand where he would touch and transfer a seal from it. The seal beneath his left hand would glow and so would the seal that Aiden had placed earlier on the hydra’s wound. It only took seconds for him to notice 犠牲 on its chest. The hydra would look at Aiden while in the midst of battle with the other two. Aiden would smile and say, “ I guess you should have just told me, the elders may have failed at putting you away, but im a Tetsujin and we never fail”. The hydra not knowing what the marking will do, becomes upset and fed up with Aiden’s interference and just like that one of the hydra’s heads would blast Aiden head on with a bijuu bomb, as the other two bijuus would do the honor of getting rid of the entire island by blowing up the island with bijuu bombs together.

The explosion would destroy nearly everything in its path and leave both Aiden and the island sinking to the bottom of the ocean. Aiden being obviously lighter than an island would drift off, with his second eyes barely active. It seems like the blow had really did him in; he definitely survived the debris due to his natural durability, but he is now missing his left arm. He also has swelled up wounds all over his body including his right eye, which can barely see now that the swelling has quickly gone up. Half of Aiden’s hair had been burnt off and a lot of Aiden’s bones had been broken. Aiden is sinking far into the deep encased in a giant diamond shaped iceberg; there truly is no hope as Aiden’s eyes fade from fatigue and lack of chakra to maintain. As he goes deeper and deeper into the black of the ocean he thinks his last thoughts. He remembers kaine and shinku, the only two people who are alive and aren’t family that knew him best. He remembered their conversation during the festival and realized that they’ll be alright; he also thought of something a little less positive. He thought of the sacrifice that he had made; putting his life down for what is right. He never would have imagined that dying would take soo long and be soo painful; there was no question in his mind that if he had to do it again, that he probably wouldn’t. But regardless he kept his promise, if the hydra cannot figure out what that symbol means, then soon the hydra will be in a cryogenic sleep for eternity or as long as it takes to figure out the word. As the lights fades Aiden can vaguely his father speaking in the back of his head while he fades with his near broken weapons, “the price of life will always be death, and to life is to never die.” Those words would echo in his head as the story to this chapter ends.

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Kouri Ten'nou

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PostSubject: Re: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyWed May 22, 2013 6:45 pm

Changed it up
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PostSubject: Re: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyWed May 22, 2013 9:03 pm

1) The name is Hyougagakure, not Hyouzangakure or Hyozangakure

2) Personality, likes and dislikes still contain a lot regarding the clan you were trying to make. Remove everything about toys, false bodies etc.

3) Movations: Hmm yeah, sounds like a motivation for the old clan. One paragraph at least.

4) Fears: No bullshit fears, come up with an actual fear or fears. One paragraph at least.

I'll get to your history once this is fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyThu May 23, 2013 8:50 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyFri May 24, 2013 1:57 pm

Interesting history. Congratulations, character approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Isais Neomae   Isais Neomae EmptyFri May 24, 2013 2:30 pm

Thanks, that means a lot to me!
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First Name: Isais
Middle Name: Aeneas
Last Name: Neomae
Alias: Bringer of Mischief

Gender: Male
Age: 18
Height: 5”11”
Weight: 165lb
Birthday: March 18
Sexuality: Straight
Relationships:N/A

Affiliation: Hyougagakure
Rank: Jounin
Element: Fuuton, Suiton, Doton
Specialization: Nintaijutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
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Personality: Isais is a hard headed individual with a knack for strategy and mischief. His personality has been said to have changed over time. Being with Sonya in the past has proven that Isais is also very sensitive to many things though most of them are not noted. One being the signs of injustice and a few others originating from that very theme as well.  Overall Isais is a laid back individual who wants to have fun.

Likes:
Isais likes compliments and praises from his peers. Isais enjoys competition and opportunities to utilize his strategic mind. Isais also enjoys rootbeer and junk food as he is a young teenager and has teenage desires.  Isais also likes people who are much like himself, in which he considers being Style Oriented, Ambitious, Intelligent, Seductive, and Persuasive.


Dislikes:  
As mentioned before, Isais hates signs of injustice. He detests bullying and unfair competition. He also detests a traitor and hypocrites. Isais will not tolerate any of these things as they serve as his vices and will trigger a side of him, which he prefers to remain dormant.

Motivation:  
Isais Neomae is a very intelligent individual who is motivated by spend his time studying people. He has been noted to show interest in human psychology and is one of the brightest kids of his age. Isais learned quickly what it means to work hard and be an independent. When he is not working, he is often found training on jutsu and martial arts. Though he started the academy at a very young age, Isais isn't a student in which the professors worry about, they know for sure that with his ambitious attitude and endless thirst for knowledge, he will succeed and become a splendid ninja.

Fears:  
Isais having the Gobi to taunt him on a daily isn’t one to be afraid of much, but much like any human being Isais does have a fear of something. Isais fears rodents for they are the most disgusting disease carrying creatures in Isais’s opinion. He is also afraid of the Gobi’s massive power as he feels that the Gobi will bring out endless possibilities for destruction throughout the nation that his former lover once referred to as the good mother.

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Bloodline Name: Gobi no Ei

Bloodline Ability:   The jinchuuriki of the Gobi has the innate ability to use a special taijutsu involving the knife-hand technique, a move that can make defense difficult due to the decreased wind resistance. In chakra cloak mode, the knife-hand technique can be done more quickly, and the user's body seems to have less air-resistance (speed 1.5x normal). In one-tailed mode, the jinchuuriki can move even faster (2x normal speed) and their taijutsu becomes even more devastating, able to bruise bone. In two tails mode, the jinchuuriki's cloak causes their bodies to become more sleek and covered with a small amount of protective mucus that allows them to slip out of an opponent's hold easily. At third-tail, the jinchuuriki can now move 2.5x as fast, and the knife-hand technique is strong enough to break small bones (the ribs), and are able to use their chakra tails to stab as well as their hands. At fourth-tail, the jinchuuriki is actually able to perform incredible acrobatic attacks, the knife-hand can actually break most bones, and the jinchuuriki can move at 3x their normal speed. At fifth tail, the jinchuuriki becomes the Gobi, and now use their tails to be able to pierce clean through the human body. They can also fly long distances, and can flatten their bodies to become nearly invisible.

Location:  Hyougagakure

Clan History:  
None


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History:  
                           Isais Neomae: Tales of a Jinchurriki

In the beginning there were men, and men with power.  The world was run by these men of power, and the man with the most power commanded the majority, and the man with the less commanded the minority. In an attempt to change the course of their history men have been known to do inhumane things. During the time of the great tailed beasts, villages would offer up human beings as vessels for these creatures. Some people offered themselves up as a sacrifice for their villages; some saw this as an opportunity to gain power and others were forced. This tale follows a boy names Isais Neomae; who migrated to hyougagakure for a better life. Originally from the mountain country this family was forced to move to the blizzard country because of the failing economy. The family endured many changes, having originated from a democratic nation and transitioning to a monarchy.  

Once arriving to Hyougagakure, the Fubukikage knew of their arrival and was in need of a host for the newest bijuu at their disposal, the Gobi.  The Neomae family was forced to pledge their allegiance to the throne through by presenting their older son, Detsuji as a vessel for the Gobi. The family had to endure living with a jinchuriki and risk losing their only son to the will of the village.  Since that say Detsuji became the center of attention to his village and family. Many in the village hated him and called him demon, while his family adored him and showed him love.  At times Isais was often forgotten by his family and buried under the shadow of his older brother.  In the village, those who detested Detsuji would judge him but completely ignore Isais as if he never existed.  At age six, Detsuji was sent off to the academy for basic ninja training.  Isais was also sent to the very same academy to be there for his brother. Those eight years at the academy was hell for Isais, and no more of a picnic for Detsuji.

At age fourteen, Detsuji was recruited from the academy for special training. This training was known as tail beast training and was suppose to help Detsuji master the beast within.  During the tailed beast training things went horribly wrong and Detsuji, was killed by his instructor. When the Neomae family heard of this, they were broken.  Despite their grief they insisted that Isais be the next jinchuriki. Out of rage and detest for Hyougagakure they had hoped that Isais would become compatible and capable of completing the tailed beast training to avenge his brother and destroy the nation. But they’re act of treason was quickly discovered due to their impatience and attempt to assassinate the king. They were sentenced to death and Isais’s life was spared simply because he was the carrier of the Gobi and at the time Gobi seemed more compatible with him.

Isais on the other hand became filled with hate for the village. As most Jinchuriki are out casted from their villages because of the demon inside, Isais was a different case. The village loved him and marveled at his resiliency towards the beast and praised him, but Isais repaid their love with hatred.  Isais vowed to himself to that he would become the end of this village. As Isais got older he was given the option of undergoing the tailed beast trainings. Isais knowing what the consequences were has delayed every tail beast training scheduled. Instead Isais began to train himself to become strong. This way of thinking had taken Isais far, for he was one of the few Genin who had been promoted to Chuunin by request of the king.  During this season in Isais’ life he met a beautiful woman by the name of Sonya.  

She was particularly talented in utilizing weapons. She would utilize them in such a way that they would set of traps which would rain down various other weapons. Because of this they referred to her as Red Rain. Isais at the time was an average chuunin and he fell in love with her.  The two had a very unorthodox relationship where there was lots of love but no physical contact. The two were nearly inseparable and at the time made the greatest tag team hyougagakure has seen. Isais developed a strong knack for Ninjutsu and Taijutsu combinations and with that Isais was capable to taking on close range foes while Sonya rained hell on long distant targets. This team became a very helpful part to the nation doing missions throughout and getting paid chuunin salary. Unfortunately citizens of the kingdom began to abuse their famous service and the Fubukikage whose hell bent on having Isais use the power of the Gobi would send them on every mission assigned with complete disregards to their level of fatigue and current health. The two went from becoming fellow shinobi of the village to being paid slaves to the needs of the nation. Because of this Sonya eventually fell in battle and it cost her life and nearly claimed Isais’ life as well.  Through her sacrifice and possibly the intervention of the Gobi, Isais woke up in the hospital after receiving medical attention.

As Isais laid there he fell into a deep depression, blaming the village for all his sorrows; he would soon remember Sonya’s will.  She loved the village with all that she was and referred to the village as, the good mother. Sonya didn’t have a mother when growing up and her father was very strict, she often spoke of how the mothers of the village would take care of her as if she was their own and that is what molded her view of Hyougagakure.

Every time she accepted a mission or did anything in the name of the village, she said that she was honoring and protecting her good mother. Knowing this, Isais could not bring himself to hate the village anymore. If he was to hate, he would have to be more direct, he would have to hate the fubukikage.  Isais was always known for being wise, for if anyone would catch word of his hatred, he would be spending his days under heavy supervision, a lot more than he already has.  So every time he was done an injustice, Isais would play it off as if he knew not. When it was time to vent, Isais would do so in the form of training and mischievous pranks. These pranks of his took strategy and escaping fast, although most of the time Isais would allow himself to be caught in the act just so a villager would know that he was the one who caused them grief.  Because of his knack for running away, Isais had appealed the Gobi’s taste and it wasn’t long after that the Gobi would begin to speak with Isais. This did not necessarily mean that they were friends, but they kept each other company.  At times Gobi would help him come up with a way of escape when the pranks got too complicated. This is how Isais gained the reputation as the bringer of mischief.  

He became one of the most innovative shinobi to be brought up in hyougagakure. Isais mostly uses his mischievous nature as motivation for his techniques and storytelling. Isais’ love for the village has grown stronger as he became older and had the opportunity to work with children and the elderly of the village. He has learned that misery isn’t only a foreign thing, or a Jinchurikin thing, but a global commonality which makes people who they are. He also learned that misery is ended when someone willingly dies to themselves and their desires for the sake of others.  Because of this Isais found favor regardless of his countless pranks, and began to accelerate quickly throughout the ninja ranks.  Because of his inherited passion, Isais only spent a short time as a special jounin and doing countless missions that were deemed beyond his rank, years, and pay roll.  It was as if Isais himself was a tailed beast. Now Isais is of the Jounin rank and the village is pressing him to complete his tailed beast trainings. The chuunin exams are at hand and the other Jinchuriki throughout the world are said to be far more advanced in their training than Isais is.  

Isais promises that he will protect the village that Sonya once called the good mother, in hopes of becoming the new Fubukikage and changing its course for the better. In the meantime we follow Isais, a man who lost his family and lover to the injustice of the village, but by love is sworn to protect the village.  How can he avenge his loved ones and protect the village at the same time. We’ll have to find out but in the meantime Isais  has dedicated his time to training himself and writing books. Until the day comes where he has to make the decision, Isais will serve his village with honor, pride, and integrity.

RP Sample:  
Shinku had successfully fled and Aiden was left to face this beast. Aiden would be successful with most of his attempts, but find himself puzzled when the head which he had placed the seal on, became useless for about half a minute and then regained full control. From that observation Aiden began to figure that his attacks do take effect on the beast but so long as one head remains, the fallen will return. Aiden needed a plan B if he is to survive this confrontation, but doing so would be difficult if he cannot buy himself enough time to think. By maneuvering and jumping about, Aiden would climb to the top of the head in the middle and use chidori stream to shock the entire body of the Hydra, buying him a few seconds to think of his next couple of moves.

By the end of the stream of electricity he would stand there as the heads bow from shock and become distracted by the sight of Shinku’s ship sailing off in the distance. A smile would slightly come up but fade just as quickly when he came to grips with the reality of being stuck on this island. Just as he made the realization the hydra and its entire group of heads would wake up and overcome their shock, without Aiden even realizing that the heads were in motion. When Aiden finally snapped back into his current situation four of the heads were facing him and with a thunderous roar, Aiden was caught in between four extreme blasts of air. The intense blasts would completely cause the fifth head to explode, and for a few of Aiden’s bones to break. From a high; Aiden came crashing to the snow, as the Hydra sets its eyes out towards the boat in the distance. The Hydra could not move because of its lower half being submerged in snow. The Hydra would attempt to blasts waves and bijuu bombs towards the ship, but every time would be a miss. Meanwhile the unconscious Aiden would be covered in blood, merely three feet away from the Hydra. While unconscious, Aiden would dream of the life he had before he made the biggest mistake of his life. He remembered being one of the best warriors in his father’s militia at age 16; along with his best friend, Zaseraf. Things were simpler then, but as a trouble maker he found a way to screw it all up. It seems as his trouble making has put him in one bad situation after another, and it wouldn’t take much for him to back track and find how he deserved this. If it wasn’t for the attack on his own village, shinku wouldn’t have to save anyone, and if shinku didn’t save the village, he wouldn’t have been a hero, and this festival wouldn’t have to happen, and no one would have had to be on this island. This wouldn’t have been the case if Aiden would have stuck to one side of the fence, being both a hero and a trouble maker couldn’t possibly end well.

Aiden regains consciousness and finds the hydra desperately trying to hit the ship, Aiden managed to pull himself onto his feet, despite the pain and began to load an intense amount of raiton chakra into his right hand. Once again it seemed as if Aiden’s bloodline kept him well equipped to withstand such a powerful attack, making his body as hard as diamonds. It didn’t take long for the whistling of Aiden’s signature chidori frost to catch the attention of the Hydra beast. Aiden had a plan and was more than ready to see this through; the hydra would now turn its rage and attention towards Aiden who is loading his chidori frost a bit more than he usually does. Aiden would stop holding his right wrist and allow the right hand to wield the chidori frost while imitating his left hand which is now stretched out like the wings of an eagle. The hydra would notice a surge of electricity going throughout Aiden’s body. While becoming impatient and uninterested in the outcome of Aiden’s preparations the hydra would prepare itself to load a bijuu bomb but just as it started its preparations 5 ice sculptured demons, the same ones from the attack on hyozangakure would attack the hydra along with a barrage of floating ice weapons aiming for the hydras eye. The hydra would be thrown off by the incoming attacks and release miniature bijuu bombs at one of the actively moving Ice sculptures. Upon impact that one would explode as the hydra would attempt hit the others and some of the incoming projectiles with sonic waves. The hydra would succeed on destroying the other four ice sculptures which were about B rank in strength but fail to remember the incoming weapons, which would gauge the beast’s eyes out. By this time Aiden had completed his move and was now engulved in what appeared to be a lightning bird. Within the lightning bird a shadow of a man, with his right hand looking claw like could be seen. The Hydra would scream in pain of its eyes being gauged out, but that would be nothing compared to what was going to happen next. Aiden made his move, running towards the beast as fast as he can screaming, “Chidori.. Legacy!” .

As he says this he runs up the hydra, freezing and incinerating its entire lower body, and as its lower body came crashing down; while in mid air Aiden would be seen holding his chidori frost in his right hand as he attempts to penetrate and freeze the heart area of the beast, and with his left hand place a sinister seal on its wound. By then the hydra had restored its eyes only to see Aiden’s final blow to cause its entire body to turn into ice. It took only seconds for the four heads to become purely ice and smash against the snow below. Aiden too would land, being unable to move much due to yet another massive output of chakra. Aiden found that he could barely even maintain his third stage for any longer. Being forced to reduce to the second stage of his bloodline, he was more than grateful that he had killed the hydra. He would laugh a bit, which would only cause him more pain as he starts to feel more pain from his broken bones. He would speak to himself out loud as if the person he is speaking to could hear him, “ Hey dad… I did something that you never could. I beat a god and lived.” As Aiden spoke to himself the forest which he had created would quickly vanish, causing the waters from about 6 feet away from Aiden to return. The hydra was soo heavy that it would break away some of the ice platform that Aiden was on and sank to the bottom of the ocean. At this point Aiden could not swim and he is about 7 meters away from shore, so he calculated that as long as he can keep his second stage on, that he will not drown, due to every drop of water about five feet from him turning into ice. Aiden would close his eyes a bit, trying to rest and regain some chakra, but as he closed his eyes he would think about the last couple of moves. It didn’t take long for Aiden to realize the flaw; His first move was to blind the hydra so that he could finish his preparations, and surprise the hydra with the attack, which was a success. The second part was eliminating the lower half of the hydra with the chidori akuma, which was also a success due to its lightning properties. But the problem lied in the chidori shimo attack. Aiden could recall seeing the rejuvenation of the hydra’s eyes by after hitting the hydra in the heart with the chidori shimo. If the chidori shimo had done the desired effect that he had wished, the heart of the beast would have been frozen instantly and he wouldn’t be able to regenerate, assuming that his perception of the beast is true. But if he was able to regenerate then that means that his chidori shimo didn’t go deep enough.


As Aiden makes this realization a large mass immerges from the water. Turns out that as Aiden froze most of its body, the center and back side of its upper half was not frozen, and before the hydras heads could completely freeze up, it already began to regenerate the fifth head that was blown off earlier. The sinking of the body gave it enough time to regenerate its lower body alone with four new heads making the hydra appear as unharmed as before. The hydra would rise and become overcome with laughter as it laid its eyes on a helpless Aiden, laying on a platform of ice. The hydra would tease as it would let the platform slowly move closer to shore. “ You tried soo hard to defeat me, in the end you would done much better for yourself if you would have placed that same effort in running away.” Aiden would then look at a tattoo like symbol on his right arm , and struggle to lift his left hand to grab it, but as he tried, he would fail. It seems like his body has become too heavy for himself. The hydra continues, “Your ice techniques are reminiscing of the ones who had trapped me in a block of ice for an entire year. It was foolish of them to think that they can out live me, but most pathetic of them to only last a year after sealing me. They left your kind no chance of surviving me, the only thing that Hyozangakure will inherit is my wrath! Your kage avoided me today, but I will claim his soul as my own soon enough.” Aiden would be puzzled by this beast and begin to ask questions while attempting to grab his right shoulder once more. “ I’ve never heard of you before, how is it that you have history with my village?” The hydra would stare down at Aiden then continue, “It is true I have not seen your face before. Such bravery, I would have met you before. I am what your village refers to as the hydra, about a year ago on this day a war happened here, between myself and half witted demon referred to as the kraken. i would have annihilated that creature if it wasn’t for your power hungry village, interfering with our battle. In the end the kraken fled, and I was sealed by the elders of your village to spend 8 lifetimes in a giant iceberg. I don’t think that even the elders themselves would have known of my short sentence. My bet is that they had been murdered by someone within your village. Upon the death of the last elder I was set free.” Aiden would reply after failing again to reach his arm, so instead he would left his eye patterns shift. “No one in the village knew that we had such a creature trapped in an iceberg, if anyone did it would be the hyozankage himself. If so he would have informed us. “Aiden would then have a flash back to his action figures and recall that one of the figures looked just like the hydra. “ We’ve been set up. I don’t get it, why would he sacrifice his entire village? Wait a minute” Aiden would recall everyone escaping from both sides, and as he was about to climb aboard he noticed shinku in the distance trying to fend off the hydra. “Shinku was the only one left behind. But why? Was he attempting to use the peace treaty and the death of shinku to control both hyozangakure and kazangakure? He couldn’t have possibly planned that.” The hydra would laugh and ask Aiden a question, “Nate River, is your kage?” Aiden would try to recall his kage’s name, but cannot recall the name Nate River. “Near is my kage.” The hydra would burst into loud laughter as it became evident that he knew something that Aiden didn’t, he would say, “You were dealing with a very dangerous man, unfortunately for you, that will be all ill ever tell you.” The hydra continued laughing as red would glow from his mouth again, indicating the coming of another bijuu bomb. Aiden wouldn’t be able to survive this one but to his look, the hydra would blast the bijuu bomb up ahead towards a loud screech of a bird coming up ahead. Within seconds, what would be a phenomenal sight came to be; both the eight tails and the kraken had arrived to kill each other. Aiden would not stand a chance and would definitely die in the cross fire, but with his last attempts Aiden does something that he might one day be grateful for or soon regret. his eye patterns stopped shifting and he makes a copy of the sinister seal that’s on his right arm and guides the copy so that it lies on top of the ice platform near his left hand where he would touch and transfer a seal from it. The seal beneath his left hand would glow and so would the seal that Aiden had placed earlier on the hydra’s wound. It only took seconds for him to notice 犠牲 on its chest. The hydra would look at Aiden while in the midst of battle with the other two. Aiden would smile and say, “ I guess you should have just told me, the elders may have failed at putting you away, but im a Tetsujin and we never fail”. The hydra not knowing what the marking will do, becomes upset and fed up with Aiden’s interference and just like that one of the hydra’s heads would blast Aiden head on with a bijuu bomb, as the other two bijuus would do the honor of getting rid of the entire island by blowing up the island with bijuu bombs together.

The explosion would destroy nearly everything in its path and leave both Aiden and the island sinking to the bottom of the ocean. Aiden being obviously lighter than an island would drift off, with his second eyes barely active. It seems like the blow had really did him in; he definitely survived the debris due to his natural durability, but he is now missing his left arm. He also has swelled up wounds all over his body including his right eye, which can barely see now that the swelling has quickly gone up. Half of Aiden’s hair had been burnt off and a lot of Aiden’s bones had been broken. Aiden is sinking far into the deep encased in a giant diamond shaped iceberg; there truly is no hope as Aiden’s eyes fade from fatigue and lack of chakra to maintain. As he goes deeper and deeper into the black of the ocean he thinks his last thoughts. He remembers kaine and shinku, the only two people who are alive and aren’t family that knew him best. He remembered their conversation during the festival and realized that they’ll be alright; he also thought of something a little less positive. He thought of the sacrifice that he had made; putting his life down for what is right. He never would have imagined that dying would take soo long and be soo painful; there was no question in his mind that if he had to do it again, that he probably wouldn’t. But regardless he kept his promise, if the hydra cannot figure out what that symbol means, then soon the hydra will be in a cryogenic sleep for eternity or as long as it takes to figure out the word. As the lights fades Aiden can vaguely his father speaking in the back of his head while he fades with his near broken weapons, “the price of life will always be death, and to life is to never die.” Those words would echo in his head as the story to this chapter ends.

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