1 A, 1 S Reserved.

Name:Shikomi Shindan [“Prepared Needle Shot”]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Description: Using a wrist-mounted device, the user can launch needles at their opponent. The device is usually used to surprise the enemy, as it may be concealed under long sleeves. The user can also spit these needles out of their mouth but not as many and not nearly as precise. No Handseals.

Name: Meisekimu [“Lucid Dream”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Description: This scent genjutsu is one that relies on a certain smell. The user will make a few handseals before the scent engulfs the battle field, (the scent will come from a container of perfume that Miko carries, meaning that it can only be used once in a battle). Once the victim has been infected, the smell will dissipate, and Miko will be able to manipulate the battlefield as she sees fit. She can reverse the opponent’s perception of directions so that right will become left and left will become right. She can also take it a step further and change more than just the way the opponent will see their environment, she can flip the world upside down for them or right side up, but it can be easily deactivated. Can be broken by D-Rank Kai, and pain but the opponent will not have the inclination to inflict pain upon themselves because of the effects of the jutsu. It lasts for about two posts before chakra is drained at one D-Rank per post, unless the user stops it.

Name:Chikatte-Chikatteikyou [“Never-Neverland”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: A non-offensive jutsu that takes a simple pouch and inscribes it with seals. This pouch will be a gateway to a storage world, where weapons can be stored, allowing the user to take weapons wherever they want without wasting energy or space. Should the pouch be destroyed, the items will become inaccessible unless summoned by the user via the Kuchiyose no Jutsu. No Handseals.

Name: Mukashimukashi[“Once Upon A Time”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Mid
Description: This vocal genjutsu is one that relies on the users voice. It is characteristic of Miko Murasaki as it uses her best trait, her talkativeness. The user must continue talking for the genjutsu to stay in effect, and whatever the user says happens within the mind of the opponent. The name of the jutsu comes from the fact that every story the user tells must begin with “Once Upon A Time”. The longer the user speaks, the more difficult it becomes for the opponent to escape it. It sends the opponent into a seductive dream world that almost makes them not want to escape. Usually, the victim would be able to tell it was a genjutsu from the beginning, but the users voice also remodels their thoughts, they actually believe everything that is happening, but a clear thinking opponent could discern the truth. Can be broken by C-Kai or pain. It often only lasts about two posts, after that chakra equivalent to a D-Rank is sapped from the user, unless the user stops it.

Name: Juso [“Hex”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Mid
Description: A fuuinjutsu technique that doesn't always require Miko Murasaki’s stylus (any writing utensil can be substituted). She will power her chakra through the conduit. Using that, she will be able to burn kanji into solid objects and even air. Though it is more than just a good writing tool, she can animate the kanji to fulfill their written purpose. An example writing the kanji for explode ‘baku’ and having that kanji explode, just not with the same intensity of a real explosion, as it has no fire or shrapnel behind it. Each kanji takes the chakra of an E-Rank. No Handseals.

Name: Bijon Mukaunosato [“Vision of Paradise”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Long
Description: A genjutsu that casts a ‘spell’ on an object, and causes a sedating effect at seeing it. It will cause a feeling of happiness in the victim. It is only temporarily (lasting about two posts), in which the user attempts to overpower the will of the opponent and keep them transfixed on the object and the feeling of paradise. Can be broken by pain or C-Rank Kai. It initially costs a D-rank to enchant the tool used, before the opponent is hit. Two posts later, a fee of one E-Rank per post is deducted, unless the user stops it.

Name: Nemurihime [“Sleeping Beauty”]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close
Description: Sleeping Beauty is a tactile genjutsu that requires Miko to pour chakra into her skin, or an item of hers that comes in contact with the opponents bare skin. Once contact is made, both of them will be subjected to the genjutsu. It brings both of the victims into a state of unconsciousness similar to that of a coma. Miko is able to control the world they enter like a lucid dream and has the powers of a goddess. No real damage can come to the opponent or Miko, the fight within the mind can last for three posts and can affect more than one person at a time, allowing teammates to get an easy kill or stalling for time. No Handseals. Can be broken by pain (normally an outside source from a partner of the enemy) and A-Rank Kai. After the three post end, while usually the opponent is incapacitated, Miko will be drained a C-Rank for each post following, unless she stops it.

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The ten free jutsu are to be in this order 3 D, 3 C, 2 B, 1 A and 1 S. So I must ask you to edit accordingly. Once this is done i shall continue.

You guys are really rigid about all of these rules. A GENIN having an S-Rank jutsu makes no sense. It hardly makes sense for one to have a B-Rank without sufficient practice.

You Can't use an S rank technique, but you get exactly the same amount of techniques you would if you were to join a clan, meaning 3 D ranks, 3 C ranks, 2 B ranks, 1 A rank, 1 S rank. You can still have other jutsu, but only th amount previously mentioned will be free.

Fine. Approve the first three D-Ranks, first three C-Ranks and the one B-Rank. Those will be the free ones.

If you could please arrange these in order of rank with Ds and the top and the B at the bottom it will make this much easier to do, now for the jutsu evaluations.

Shikomi Shindan - for some reason or another we have decided to not allow poison on this site so remove that. Also know that you will need to purchase this wrist mounted device if you wish to use it that way.

Meisekimu - having total control over the opponent's perception is a tad to much for a D rank

Chikatte-Chikatteikyou - How much can you store and what would happen if the bag or whatever you have marked is destroyed?

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right lets do this now, for every genjutsu add into the description what can break it. Like pain or Genjutsu Kai

Fixed that.

every gejutsu can be broken by kai, it just takes higher levels of chakra for higher level illusions

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Meisekimu [“Lucid Dream”]
Should be able to be broken by pain as well. Also, the beginning part is not genjutsu, since you need a real smell to affect your victim. That part would either need to be facilitated by some kind of item or ninjutsu. Do something about that, I'm not about to tell you what to do with it, but at present it cannot stay as is.

Mukashimukashi[“Once Upon A Time”]
Say whether or not the user is capable of movement other than speaking. Considering its rank, it should be a no.

Nemurihime [“Sleeping Beauty”]
Be more specific with the pain part of being released. Since both are unconscious during the genjutsu, that's not really an escape from it unless it's someone else doing it to those affected. Also explain how it makes sense that Miko can feel pain and is not released from the illusion.

For the second jutsu, not being able to move doesn't make much sense.

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Fine, say how long it lasts. If there is a chakra cost per post. Something to that effect.

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Add how long each of the genjutsu last.

As for Bijon Mukaunosato [“Vision of Paradise”], Nemurihime [“Sleeping Beauty”] and Meisekimu [“Lucid Dream”], say how long the initial trap can stay for it goes away. Like the enchanted object one. I suggest an initial chakra cost for that, say how long it will stay on said object before it dissipates (you can't keep it like that forever), then say how long the genjutsu will last. Then, if you want it to last longer, include a chakra consumption for each post thereafter.

Okay, for Meisekimu [“Lucid Dream”] what are you going to do about the scent? The genjutsu itself cannot create the scent.

I've completed my look over of the genjutsu. A complete jutsu look over will be done by someone else. (Probably Takeshi)

Bump.

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All the jutsu needing items of sorts may need to be purchased unless this is a special case, just a heads up

Seeing how the rest have been reviewed I'll Approveunless told or stated otherwise.