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 Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]

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Kyo Uchiha
Kyo Uchiha
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Ryo : 1500

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PostSubject: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyWed Apr 09, 2014 11:33 pm

Spoiler:

E-RANK
Name: Blazing messenger
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Support
Element: Katon
Range: Melee
Speciality: -
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: The user creates asmall flame, and molds it in the form of a little bird. This bird can transport small objects, for example a message written in a piece of paper, and thus acts as a somewhat effective way of communicating in a pinch. The little bird can only transport one object a time, and the object must be smaller than a kunai. The little bird can travel 1 kilometer away from the user before fading.

Name: Finger Spark
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Range: None
Specialty: None
Duration: None
Cooldown: 1 post
Description: The user snaps their fingers after conveying a small amount of fire-element chakra into them. This generates a small spark, which can be used as a lighter. Useless in battle, but can be useful to light a fire, or to set flammable substances on fire.

D-RANK
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to medium range
Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)

Name: Katon: Yamibarai
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: 10 m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: This technique requires no hand seals, as all it does is to infuse a small amount of fire-element chakra into a small object (not bigger than a kunai), or in a small portion of the ground, by simply making phisical contact with it. If the object of the portion of the ground that was infused with this chakra comes into contact with any source of heat, from the spark of a lighter to another Katon jutsu, it will release a small burst of flames, which will not only damage nearby opponents but also inflict 1st degree burns on them. To clarify, the item won't explode, it will simply be enveloped in flames that will burn nearby opponents. The user must be distant 10 meters or less to trigger the burst. Only one item/portion of the ground can be imbued with chakra with a single use of this technique.

Name: Katon: Netsuparusu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Katon
Range: Melee
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: The user performs the Tiger hand seal, gathers fire-element chakra beneath the pores of their skin, and release a wave of high-pressure hot air that will knock back nearby opponents, preventing them from landing physical blows on the user. To clarify, this technique doesn't deal any damage, it simply pushes nearby opponents two meters back, so that they cannot land Taijutsu, Nintaijutsu or melee-range Ninjutsu techniques on the user. The Ninjutsu stat of the user must be greater than the opponent's Strenght stat for this technique to work.

Name: Rising Kick
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: The user throws two high kicks to the opponent in rapid succession. The first one is but a mere decoy: if the opponent attempts to block it, it will be easier for the second to hit. The second kick is itself powerful enough to knock an opponent airborne, in order for the user to follow up with an aerial combo.

Name: Meteor kick
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Melee
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: The user jumps and, when about to land, performs a downward flying kick, which allows him to stomp on the opponent from above. While very easy to perform, this move can dish out some serious damage if the opponent was already airborne, because in this case it will be possible for the user to catch them in their stomach with this kick, spiking them to the ground with force. The downside is that this move is very straightforward and thus very predictable, making it easy to counter.

C-RANK
Name: Katon: Great Fireball Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 50 feet
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. At its largest, Goukyaku no Jutsu is 10 feet in diameter, and can travel at 30 mph. Four post cooldown.


Name: Katon: Phoenix Sage Art Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 50 feet
Description: This jutsu can create up to ten fireballs that are each six inches in diameter, which are spat out of the user's mouth, flying wildly in every direction and assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can be hidden within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction, and can cause up to second degree burns on contact with skin. Each fireball moves at 20 mph to allow control of one fireball at a time. Requires handseals. Four post cooldown.

Name: Hayabusa Otoshi (Peregrine Falcon Drop)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: Melee (mid-air)
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: A mid-air attack. While at an elevated position, the user will grab their opponent from behind. Firmly locking themselves to their back, the user will then lock their ankles onto the opponent's neck in order to get their body rigid. Finally, on the descent, the user proceeds to drive and plant the victim head first into the ground. Essentially a belly to back pile-driver, the move can provide a great concussion to his opponent's head.


Last edited by Kyo Uchiha on Wed Apr 16, 2014 6:59 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Ryo : 396513

Character sheet
Chakra:
Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Left_bar_bleue190/190Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyThu Apr 10, 2014 1:26 am

Ikimuno Benkuo
  • This Academy Jutsu isn't available unless you first buy the jutsu for 5,000 ryo. So you will need a different one.


One thing I see as a recurring theme in your jutsu is the difference between "type" & " Specialization" Type- would be like "Offensive/Defensive" Specialization- would be Ninjutsu/Genjutsu etc. You have these two areas switched around. Also- all of your jutsu need to specify a duration, most all jutsu are instant(1 post) unless stated otherwise.

Finger Spark
  • E Rank jutsu have a 1 post cooldown


Katon: Yamibarai
  • Since this is a D Rank jutsu, it should specify how big of an object it can imbue/explode. As well as how many objects can be imbued.
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Kyo Uchiha
Kyo Uchiha
Posts : 16
Ryo : 1500

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyThu Apr 10, 2014 8:55 am

Edited everything according to what Semasu-san said!
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Male Posts : 1428
Ryo : 396513

Character sheet
Chakra:
Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Left_bar_bleue190/190Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyThu Apr 10, 2014 4:27 pm

Katon: Yamibarai
  • Add a 1st degree burn instead of "minor burns" to this jutsu.



Looks good after this small fix, I approve these jutsu but you will have to wait for another staff to approve them as well.
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Ryo : 1500

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyThu Apr 10, 2014 4:39 pm

Done, waiting for second approval :)
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Hisame
Hisame
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Ryo : 598400

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Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyMon Apr 14, 2014 11:50 pm

I know you've been told this, but One thousand years of death is D-rank here.

Yamibarai - This fits more under the idea of the Bakuton. Fire style doesn't generally create explosions like this. I would change it a bit to fit the KAton element more.

Netsuparusu - Please state how far they are pushed back. A few meters may be a bit much also, since it is just a D-rank technique.

Phoenix Sage Art Technique - C-ranks have a 4 post cooldown. I know you just copy and pasted fromt he clan section for the Uchiha, but a lot of the older clans here are still a bit out of date with our current system, of which we are in the process of fixing slowly. Just with the plot and everything else, it is not on as high of a priority. All that is asked of this is that the cooldown is upped to 4. This will be changed within the clan a bit later as well.

Shishi Rendan - We currently have this technique not available to users. The reason being is because it is based and copied off of the Shadow of the Dancing Leaf, which is followed with part of the Hidden Lotus. With the Gates and their techniques not available yet, I'm afraid the same has to be said about this one. Being so, you'll have to replace it with a different technique.

Once these changes are made, bump the topic and we shall look over the edits.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyWed Apr 16, 2014 7:01 pm

Sorry for not showing up yesterday, I had a seriously busy day at university... Anyway everything is edited as requested, I hope it is ok now. And NO, the Peregrine Falcon Drop does NOT require Shadow of the Dancing Leaf nor Chakra Gates, I checked.
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Ryo : 396513

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Chakra:
Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Left_bar_bleue190/190Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration]   Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] EmptyWed Apr 16, 2014 7:10 pm

Uchiha Kyo [Jutsu Registration] Approve
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