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Saizo
Saizo
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PostSubject: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jun 30, 2013 11:26 pm

Name: Waterhose Jutsu :P
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: Short to Mid-Range
Specialty: N/A
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A steady and quickly rotating current of water is fired from ones hand, the water has adjustable pressure to garden house up to enough pressure to break a boulder, works exceptionally well at putting out fires or even washing windows. Rotation can spin enemies hit by the attack.


Name: Water Slice Technique (Mizukiri no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water Release
Range: All Ranges
Duration: Seven posts
Cooldown: Three posts
Description: After using the Hydrification Technique, the user is able to use the water from their body to slice objects, focusing a current of water, to the point where it takes on a sharp edge along the users body, which the user launches at foes. Although this attack does usually slashing damage.

Name: Hydro Blaster Technique (Mizu Bakufu no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water Release
Range: Short-Mid Range
Duration: One Post
Cooldown: Two Post
Description: The user is able to, through the Hydrification Technique, compress an amount of water in their fingers, palm or upper wrist, firing a drop with tremendous force and speed similar to a shot which would be about nineteen miles per hour, enough to easily pierce through solid stone.

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water. The maximum amount of clones is 6. This clone is destroyed in a single blow, and has a 3 post cooldown.

Name: Sennen Goroshi (One Thousand Years of Death)
Canon/Custom:Cannon
Rank: E
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A (Death Element)
Range: Short Range
Duration: 1 post (Not counting the thousand years of death afterwards)
Cooldown: 3 posts?
Description: A very simple technique with an overly dramatic name, One Thousand Years of Death is little more than inserting one's index and middle fingers (similar to the Tiger hand seal) into the opponent's bottom, causing constipation, pain and/or embarrassment. It has no effect on unconscious targets.


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Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyTue Jul 09, 2013 5:18 pm

Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi are auto added to your jutsu list topic, so please do that and make another custom E-rank jutsu.

Also, please make up a name for that first one before you resubmit. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 2:34 am

Bump
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Eden
Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 11:11 pm

Okay!

Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Bravo
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Saizo
Saizo
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyTue Jul 16, 2013 11:49 pm

Name: Water Spout Jutsu (Shiofuki no Jutsu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water Release
Range: Short-Mid Range (Max:60 meters)
Duration: Three posts
Cooldown: Four posts
Description: This jutsu is a variation of the Hozuki Hydro Blaster Technique, but also more advanced. The amount of water compressed is far more then regular giving it a tad more bulky appearance. When fired it resembles its parent jutsu till it explodes, releasing several (20 more or less) rain like drops that can pierce right through a boulder. The technique can explode in any direction(Backwards, Forwards, To the left, To the right, Or plain scattered everywhere) the user chooses whenever the user chooses, including right as soon as the bullet is fired. These mini-bullets can travel in and through human bodies, but they lose speed dramtically and can only usually do damage to a single person. the bullet can also be fired after piercing something but the speed is slightly decreased. If no specific scatter time, the bullet will scatter when it stops moving, whether by hitting something that absorbs the shot or no longer in the air. The shot travels for 3 posts with decreasing speeds till dropping down and exploding if it hasn't already.

Name: Explosive Seal (Bakuhatsu shīru)
Canon/Custom:Cannon in a sense but essentially Custom
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Duration: Placing one seal requires 1 post
Cooldown: Can place a total of 3(Place, not explode) before a 5 post cool down
Description: The explosive seal consists of a special writing, centring around the kanji for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely(with a snake hand seal), or after being ignited by flame. Normal ability costs normal amount and the radius is 9 ft. One can also spend 10 extra chakra and the radius is 12 ft, power remains the same. If not stated which rank is in use, it is a normal B rank. The seals can be placed on any surface the hand touches after preparing the jutsu. The tags have a 10 post limit before they automatically explode. Can be deactivated by the one who performed the technique.


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Saizo
Saizo
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Jul 18, 2013 1:58 pm

Bumpsies
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Eden
Eden
Female Posts : 2298
Ryo : 1597319

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyFri Jul 19, 2013 7:30 pm

Water Spout - Approved as a B-rank technique: 40,000 Ryo + 1,500 word training topic

Explosive Seal - Approved at 65,000 ryo + 1,500 word training topic
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Saizo
Saizo
Male Posts : 527
Ryo : 177003

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Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Left_bar_bleue490/490Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Empty_bar_bleue  (490/490)

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jul 28, 2013 12:38 am

Earned From CRP
Name: Rasengan
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Specialty: High Chakra Control/Kage Bunshin(Or any other clone juts) and Decent Chakra Control
Duration: For as long as the user chooses
Cooldown: Can use Twice before 6 post cooldown
Description: The technique takes the shape transformation of one's chakra to the "highest possible point". The Rasengan is still a very useful, powerful, versatile, and difficult technique to learn and master. The Rasengan does not require any hand seals to use, relying only on the chakra control of the user. Once it is complete, it becomes self-sustaining, which does not give the Rasengan a definite limit like the Chidori. The compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the Rasengan to grind into whatever it comes in contact with to inflict major damage. This tends to launch the target spiraling backward after being hit or, if the target is lying on the ground or being launched to the ground, the destructive force is enough to form a crater. The Rasengan can be increased in size by adding 10 more chakra, it is more or less 2/3rds the size of big ball Rasengan (Minato was able to this)
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Hisame
Hisame
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jul 28, 2013 11:33 pm

Approved Saizo, enjoy you new jutsu.
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Saizo
Saizo
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Ryo : 177003

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 5:20 pm

Id like to actually purchase my explosive seal one now, should have enough if counting MOTM runner-up prizes with current ryo.
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Eden
Eden
Female Posts : 2298
Ryo : 1597319

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 8:53 pm

Ryo deducted.
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Saizo
Saizo
Male Posts : 527
Ryo : 177003

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Aug 18, 2013 6:29 pm

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Hisame
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Aug 18, 2013 7:25 pm

Training looks good. 

Approved 1/2
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Jojo Kaguya
Jojo Kaguya
Male Posts : 1347
Ryo : 493454

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Aug 21, 2013 4:05 pm

Training approved 2/2
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Saizo
Saizo
Male Posts : 527
Ryo : 177003

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyFri Jan 10, 2014 11:49 pm

Name: Reserves Seal
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Arms Length
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 10 threads
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description:A placeable seal that allows for the storage of chakra. It holds 35 chakra (Cost is also 35) and can be placed on most surfaces, excluding anything living. When released, the user or chosen recipient gains as much chakra as used to fill it, but can't go over their max amount.(405/400) The seal lasts till used, meaning cross thread travel is possible as long as the object holding the seal is brought.

Name: Hyper-Kinetic Position Reverser
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 35m range between seals
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 10 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: This technique allows for the placement of two identical seals from the users hand. He can place the seals on a certain object (Stuff one can hold in their arms, area (Anything someone can't carry), or person. The two seals allow for a teleportation jutsu to be used as long as both objects are in the same thread. Only certain combonations of these three are allowed though. Area-Person, Object-Person, Object-Object, Person-Person. Object and person switch places when the jutsu is activated, usable 3 times. Person to area allows the person to teleport right on top of the seal, wherever it is placed. Usable once.
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Eden
Eden
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Ryo : 1597319

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySat Jan 11, 2014 6:33 pm

Hyper-Kinetic Position Reverser - Denied. Unless you are able to utilize space-time jutsu (which is banned), you cannot teleport.

Reserves Seal - Approved at 45,000 Ryo; 1,500 word training topic
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Saizo
Saizo
Male Posts : 527
Ryo : 177003

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Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jan 12, 2014 7:46 am

Name:Water Release: Water Mirror Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive  
Element: Water Release
Range: Short Range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: The user creates a large, flat, circular pool of water in front of their opponent. Its surface acts like a mirror, perfectly reflecting the attacking targets. By then rotating the 'mirror' 90°, the reflections emerge and materialise from the mirror, where they collide with the mirrored targets. As these reflections use the exact same technique as their counterpart — regardless of its type — they counter the attack completely, while repelling them in the process. However, upon impact, the reflections disperse into water.

Name: Fire Sealing Method
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: Takes 3 posts to prepare scroll.
Cooldown: 4 posts between other element sealing methods
Description: The jutsu-sealing space in the scroll is left blank, for the formula to be inscribed in with a brush. After performing the needed hand seals, chakra-like vapour appears from the scroll, and envelops the flames. They are sucked in towards the scroll, and the appearance of the kanji for seal (封) certifies the technique's completion. Once the sealing is performed, the technique's effects cannot be released anew as long as an unsealing technique is not applied. It is an effective technique to circumvent any secondary damage a dangerous enemy technique might cause. It is even capable of sealing the black flames of Amaterasu. Can only seal one jutsu of the element

Name: Lightning Sealing Method
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: Takes 3 posts to prepare on sealing scroll.
Cooldown: 4 posts between any other element sealing methods
Description: The jutsu-sealing space in the scroll is left blank, for the formula to be inscribed in with a brush. After performing the needed hand seals, chakra-like vapour appears from the scroll, and envelops the lightning. They are sucked in towards the scroll, and the appearance of the kanji for seal (封) certifies the technique's completion. Once the sealing is performed, the technique's effects cannot be released anew as long as an unsealing technique is not applied. It is an effective technique to circumvent any secondary damage a dangerous enemy technique might cause. Can only seal one jutsu of the element.

Name: Point Release
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 6 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: The user places a small seal on the target, usually on a chakra point, but can be placed elsewhere and achieve the same effect. It can be placed directly from the palm on to the opponent and speed similar to FTG's seal placement speed. The seal actually closes chakra flow by force causing excess work to push chakra through the system when using jutsu, adding a cost of 5-10 chakra to jutsu used by the marked person (C and below require extra 5, B and above require an extra 10) while the seal is on the person.


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Eden
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Ryo : 1597319

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Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyTue Jan 14, 2014 7:27 pm

Water Release: Water Mirror Technique - Bump it up to A-rank and give it an A-rank cooldown (8 posts)

Fire Sealing Method - Take out the bit regarding Amaterasu flames. I won't approve that. It also needs at least the 6 post cooldown minimum for B-rank jutsu. Also, as a reminder, it would only be able to seal up to B-rank of jutsu, and the only seal-able type of jutsu would be projectile such as a fireball.

Lightning Sealing Method - Refer to what I stated for the Fire Sealing Method.

Point Release - Denied. I disallow the sapping of chakra. Plus, a clan has a KKG specifically for this already.

NOTE: You need to start following the site's cooldown rules, hun lol An A-rank requires a minimum 8 post cooldown. B-rank requires 6. Can't be any lower.
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Saizo
Male Posts : 527
Ryo : 177003

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Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Jan 16, 2014 3:58 am

Name: Wind Release Stream
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Fuuton
Range: Short to Mid Ranges
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 post
Cooldown: 2 post
Description: By blowing air from their mouth, the user is able to change direction while in mid-air at high speeds. It can also be used to blow up a dust cloud, concealing one's location and movements.

Also changed rank and cd of Mirrors as requested, and reworked the point sealing technique to just make user spend more chakra in jutsu and not a constant drain. I also dont feel like Fire Sealing Method should be changed, as it is a canon jutsu.
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Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Jan 16, 2014 5:25 am

Water mirrors - Approved at 95,000 Ryo; 2,000 word training topic

Point Release - Approved at 35,000 Ryo; 1,000 word training topic

Wind Release Stream - Approved at 12,000 Ryo; 750 word training topic

Ryo deducted.
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Saizo
Saizo
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 4:32 am

Name: Water Colours
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: Short
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 2 post
Description: The user, while using the Hydrification Technique is able to change the colour of water inside or in contact with the users body into any colour they choose. It can also be used to make the water look like different substances, like blood or alcohol, they don't share anything else besides appearance.

Name: Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: Long (45 meter diameter, 20 meters tall)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 7 Posts
Cooldown: 20 post
Description: This technique is a larger version of the Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave. With it, the user spews out a massive amount of water, covering an entire area with crushing, nearly unavoidable waves. The water then forms into a giant orb, instead of letting it flow freely like the original.


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Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 5:50 am

Water colors - Approved. 5,000 Ryo + 500 word training topic

Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave - Give me the dimensions of the area the water affects. Also, what are the dimensions of the orb? What purpose does it serve? If it serves no purpose, then make the jutsu instant and take out the part about the orb.
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Saizo
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 6:06 am

Well, the canon states that it forms an orb, but I guess the purpose is to trap people inside, instead of making a huge pile of water just for it to be soaked into the ground and be the end of it. If anything, the main purpose of the jutsu is to make the orb, the huge waves are just something that happens during the process. ._.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 6:18 am

Alright, well then state how the jutsu is actually meant to trap multiple shinobi within the orb. That means you'll have to give dimensions of the orb. :)

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 06, 2014 6:29 am

I had aready put dimensions under range. And they get hit by the waves spewing out from Sai that take the form of the orb, thus submerging them, that work for you?
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