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 Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration

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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 02, 2015 6:53 am

Oh, apologies. The way it was worded made it seem as though the chakra was moving towards the enemy while you did nothing. I honestly can not find anything else wrong with this jutsu. If another staff does, then I would surely note any problem they find to my memory. For now, you have my approval. Currently awaiting the rechecking and approval of another staff member.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 02, 2015 7:07 am

I can reword it for the sake of it being more easily understood that the attack is the finger itself. I suggest taking a gander at it again. S-ranks are difficult because they are hard to come up with a happy middle ground between too powerful and not worth having. Look through it again; take a look at how I word things. Part of grading is making suggestions and questioning details in the description. Give this another whack once I bump. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyTue Feb 03, 2015 4:38 am

Okay, this is my bump. Give it another shot, Storm. This time read the description carefully and see how you can perhaps make suggestions or perhaps even question the details therein.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyTue Feb 03, 2015 1:42 pm

Then, please ponder over the questions I ask you.

Kesshō Hanji: Ippon'yubi no Eikyō :: Final Judge: One-Finger Impact:

  • How long does the chakra spread? Can you control its length to make it stretch even longer? This is for further clarification only.
  • What does this do against wind nature attacks? If someone was to use a fuuton jutsu against this raiton jutsu what would happen?
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyTue Feb 03, 2015 7:34 pm

The length of the chakra from the finger does not stretch any further than the length in inches I provided in the description.

Because this technique requires the use of Raiton no Yoroi, the chakra around the hand works as armor still, which essentially means that a Fuuton jutsu used would be lowered by 1 rank in potency. It would still hurt like bloody hell if it hit, but it would be reduced in strength. For example, if I were to use this technique on a S-rank Fuuton blast that was aimed straight for me, the damage done to me would be reduced to A-rank due to the armor, but taking a direct hit regardless would leave me with at least some fractures, especially in the arm I use for the technique. This is without my END stat coming into play as well. If I attacked the blast with the technique, the blast would likely explode at the impact point between the index finger and the blast itself, which would still end up hurting pretty darn bad
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyTue Feb 03, 2015 7:35 pm

Oh! I see I didn't add a length in inches haha. I'll add that in real quick.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyTue Feb 03, 2015 7:38 pm

Eden wrote:
The chakra stretches outward from the tip of his finger, with the end point being completely pointed, like that of a Chinese straight sword (the length of the chakra from the tip of the index finger to the tip of the chakra is 4 inches).

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PostSubject: Re: Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration   Shinteki, Eden / Jutsu Registration - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 04, 2015 12:53 pm

Approved. Now awaiting a second approval.
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