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Name: Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 18 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: A genjutsu that allows one to trick others into mistaking the place they're in for another. This technique's main feature is that it can be cast over an extensive surface, therefore any and all who step into the illusion's area of effect will fall under the spell. That said, it might not work so well on people who are well-versed or otherwise skilled in genjutsu. The Genjutsu's effects are only triggered once the victim has stepped into the 18 meter, spherical diameter. The diameter of the sphere's radius is both 18 meters length and width. If the victim walks/exits out the range, the genjutsu's effects will begin to wear off after one post.

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Alright let's get to business. Sorry it took so long for someone to get to this.


First off please change your Kawirimi No Jutsu to this one

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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 50 feet
Description: One round charge up rather than hand seals; Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object, this object must be something like a log or stone roughly the same size as the user. The size doesn't have to be exactly the same as the user but what this means is a person can't replace themselves with a leaf or a twig, nor could they replace themselves with a giant boulder, if questions arise over uses of this technique contact an admin but any decision they make is final. In addition this can not be another person unless that person is willing. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. These objects or other people must be within 50 feet of the user when the technique is performed. There is a 5 round cool down between uses of this technique and it can only be used a maximum of 3 times per topic.

Just to save confusion!

Moving along

One thousand years of death Approved

Joint Displacement : I have a few issues with this jutsu for a few reasons. For one I don't think it will be very effective in combat. Are your intentions for this jutsu geared more towards just regular post or do you ever intend to find yourself using this against another person? The reason I ask is because most shinobi have a basic understanding of hand-to-hand combat and simply going for joints is common knowledge. So it would be easy to see coming unless when you plan on using it you plan on being very descriptive in the motions of your body and how you use your karate. Please pm me on this one because I wanna work with you on it because as of right now its a little to basic for D rank and I think we could make it better.



Demonic Illusion: Hell-Viewing Technique: Approved

Illusion Clone Jutsu: This jutsu is almost exactly like

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Name: Bunshin No Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Description: Hand Seals; Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance and thus this clone can do absolutely no damage at all in any way. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse. The number of clones able to be produced is determined by the user's rank as follows. D Rank; 2 Clones. C Rank; 3 Clones. B Rank; 4 Clones. A Rank; 5 Clones. S/SS Rank; 6 Clones. 4 round cool down.

The only main difference is at D rank you would get 5 clones rather than 2. So fix it to be more reasonable until then Denied


Hidden Presence Jutsu: Switch the chakra cost to 10 and Ill be good with it.





Please make the mentioned fixes and I will get back to it ASAP!


~Shiro

Right, Okay. I changed everything BUT the illusion clone jutsu.(Excluding the joint displacement which I will/have PM'd you on) It is basically a more enhanced version of bushin no jutsu like any other clone jutsu like the lightning style clone, water clone and even the shadow clone. Only these clones can actually do damage whereas the one you compared my illusion clone jutsu too can't do anything in terms of damage and that it doesn't even have a shadow.
The Illusion clone jutsu however is a genjutsu and does no damage but confuse the victim. you know how genjutsu's work.

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The Illusion clone jutsu however is a genjutsu and does no damage but confuse the victim. you know how genjutsu's work.

So Why not change it so that it isn't an illusion but a hallucination that blurs your opponents view or makes their vision hazy causing the to see multiple "Clones" of you. That makes it seem more like a genjutsu, something that affects the senses and perception.

Because that's what Genjutsu represents is it not...

Genjutsu isn't really about making illusions as much as it is about affecting the other persons perception through the senses. Sight, Sound,Smell, Touch. With genjutsu the illusion is seen through that persons eyes and mind. Much like the movie inception through genjutsu your plant a thought in someones mind. Take hell viewing technique for example. Through the eye contact your begin to create the *mental illusion causing them to see horrific views. While you the creator of the genjutsu don't see the horrors being seen by the effected. Does that make sense?

Once all your canon jutsu are accepted will add them to site jutsu list so it stops the same technique been made mulitple times by different users.

It does so with the crow genjutsu, the victim of the jutsu will be affected by seeing a barrage of clones that can't cause any damage and doesn't have any form. It's only used for it's illusionary purposes. Nothing more. The victim only sees the clones and that's it.

Also, I added a new jutsu. Hope it's okay Koma that I copied on of yours...

Name: Hidden Presence Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: Self
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 10 chakra per post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: Often in the Shinobi world hiding yourself is imperative. The User of this Genjutsu must focus on an object of equivalent size to his/her self. Upon memorizing it they can then create an illusion of it to hide them much like camouflage. This is however limited by the ability to memorize as the Shape, Smell, and size of the illusion is based on memory. The cost is 10 chakra per post. The Hidden Presence Jutsu is often used as an escape method or a hidden spot for a sneak attack. However the illusion is broken if anyone other then the user attempts to touch it. Also, those with sensory based jutsu's and chakra eye sight can spot the user.

--C-Ranked--

Name: Dusk Crow Genjutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: None
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Up to 10 Metres
Description: This jutsu requires handseals, then the jutsu can take effect. This genjutsu can trap a victim in an illusion with no eye contact.. The genjutsu traps the victim in a torrent of crows, leaving them at the user's mercy, the enemy will feel like they are been attacked by crows as they flock around him or her, this jutsu can be used to distract enemy or even be used as a way of escape. Lasts 3 posts and cooldown of 5.

Name: Illusion Clone Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: /
Range: 50 Meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts after Duration finishes
Description: Creates an illusion of ones self that to the naked eye is exactly the same. However it has no smell, weight or any other physical manifestation. Commonly used as a distraction to cover a sneak attack or an escape. The limit to the amount of illusions one can make is between 5 and 10 based on ones mastery of the jutsu. The clones Mirror the originals movements and when something physical touches them it passes through as they hold no physical form. in return they have no ability to do harm.


All Approved


Replace Hell viewing with the all ready approved site version.

Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: None
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Short
Description: Handseals. This illusion best works in surprise attacks. The target will first see something swirling around them common to the area, leaves, loose snow, sand. On their next post, they will begin to see and hear something that they would never want to see, the death of a loved one, old people making love, it ranges. It shows them their worst fears. Can be broken by kai, pain, etc. Pain in the genjutsu does not break it (given their worst fear is something like fire).

Changed my dear <3

Bumping for free B-Rank

bumping for jutsu

Lighting Fists!:

First, state that the combo will only work if the opponent is hit directly.

Edited.

Also, state that depending on the rank of the opponent they may or may not become stunned on the first hit. Go like this: D-rank always gets stunned, C-rank gets stunned 50% of the time, B-rank gets stunned 25% of the time, A-rank gets stunned 15% of the time, S-rank gets stunned 10% of the time, and Kage doesn't get stunned at all.

Edited! GOGOGOGO!

Make it a 4-post cooldown and that jutsu is good to go!

Done and dusted.

Bumping for Demoinc Hell Viewing technique

Specify the circumference by which the genjutsu is in affect.

Specify as well that it is in the shape of a sphere around the point at which you stand, otherwise there will be no genjutsu to walk into.

Alright, you're good to go!

APPROVED!