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Renga Zakii
Renga Zakii
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Wolves  Left_bar_bleue180/180Wolves  Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyThu Nov 10, 2011 3:02 am

Animal Type: Wolves
Number of "Family" Members: 5

Name: Zen
Height: 1ft tall 1'5" Long
Weight: 20 Lbs
Rank: D
Element: Katon
Personality: Zen is the most timid of the wolf family. He doesn't speak verbally, but can communicate with his owners through telepathy. He is afraid to fight, but loves to heal people who are injured. He likes to more of a companion than a battle partner.
Appearance:
Wolves  Cade_the_wolf_pup_by_xBlackPetalX
Abilities:

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Equipment: N/A

Name: Hakurou
Height: 3' tall 4'6' long
Weight: 80lbs
Rank: C
Element: Katon
Personality: Hakurou is the silent type. He does not say much, and prefers to speak through his actions. His main goal is to aid his master in whatever they are doing, whether it is good or bad. He is also willing to risk his own life so that his master will not be injured.
Appearance:Wolves  Anime-wolfs-anime-wolves-7226541-68
Abilities:

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Equipment:

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Name: Arca
Height: 5' tall 6' long
Weight: 150 lbs
Rank: B
Element: Fuuton
Personality: Arca is a very protective wolf. She won't let anybody she doesn't trust near her host, but isn't as attached to protecting her host as Hakurou. She is also very aggressive to anybody who rubs her the wrong way. Her use of taijutsu is her biggest attack method and attacks at a moment notice. She is very loyal to her host.
Appearance:
Wolves  DarkArcanine
Abilities:

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Equipment: N/A

Name: Hei
Height: 8' tall 10' long
Weight: 200 lbs
Rank: A
Element: Raiton
Personality: Hei is brutal and has no regard for anybody but himself and his host, though he does not even like his host. He will use any command given as an opportunity to tear his opponents limb from limb. He is also ready to make a meal out of any unsuspecting person or animal alike.
Appearance:Wolves  Rrrrrrrrrraaaaa
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Name: Fenris
Height: 12' Tall
Weight: 200lbs
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Personality: Fenris is a relentless killer. He uses his knowledge of kenjutsu to reduce his opponents to scraps that he can enjoy for a snack. He shows constant, blatant disrespect for all except the host of the wolf family, no matter who the are or their position in life. Cross him and you are certain to be dead.
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Last edited by Renga Zakii on Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:50 am; edited 11 times in total
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Wolves  Left_bar_bleue180/180Wolves  Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySun Nov 27, 2011 11:35 pm

Completion Bump
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Wolves  Left_bar_bleue180/180Wolves  Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

Wolves  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 12:12 am

Bump
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Wolves  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 12:33 am

Zen - the D-C Katon jutsu needs what it can do at both ranks, not just one. Edit to give a D rank description, and a C rank description.

Make these edits then bump and we will continue to the next wolf if the edits suffice.
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Wolves  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 12:43 am

Quote :
Name: Flaming Tongue
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-C
Element: Katon
Type: Ijutsu
Range: Contact
Description: After a one post charge, Zens mouth becomes engulfed in katon chakra. This chakra is used to cauterize gashes that are up to six inches long and an inch deep.
D Rank - Cauterizes gashes up to 3 inches and half an inch deep.
C Rank - Cauterizes gashed up to 6 inches and an inch deep.
After use Zen requires a four post cool down.

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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 1:47 am

Add that in.

Hakurou - The first tech is also Ninjutsu/ Kenjutsu. The Cloud Style Beheading, I believe needed to be reapproved once more as well. That needs to be finished and bump for this wolf. The weapon is good. Do the crescents shift as they are fired and do they take angled pasths? Or is it a straight path and the crescent stay vertical?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 3:04 pm

They stay with the angle the were fired from. Vertical. Edit Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 8:47 pm

Hakurou - The only issue I have is where in the Crush Claws you talk about as a last resort, the wolf pounces. That can only happen if you keep the chakra in the claws, not if you release it. So divide it up into two sections with the jutsu having two different uses. If chakra is fired, and if chakra is kept in the paws/claws. Make that edit and bump and we will continue.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyThu Dec 08, 2011 3:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyFri Dec 09, 2011 12:16 am

As far as the flame beheading, we will go back to that.

Arca - Tailwind - at b rank, the winds can be 50 mph. However, take out the 1.5 times faster. You'll simply be going 50 mph faster. As far as reducing 50% on the enemy, that can stay.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySat Dec 10, 2011 12:45 am

Edit bump
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySat Dec 10, 2011 1:53 am

Skull Bash - Arca sprints toward the target with _______ at full speed. Are you missing something here?

Tornadic Impact - its Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu. At A rank, the winds can be much faster and the tornado can be much larger. A Rank is about being able to pummel the shit out of someone, and potentially kill.
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Wolves  Empty
PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySat Dec 10, 2011 4:42 am

That would be her head I was missing in there.

Can it be 100ft in diameter and about 100-150 mph?
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySat Dec 10, 2011 2:05 pm

Edit your sentence then.

And yesh, that is perfectly acceptable at A Rank. Go 100 ft. and 100 mph.

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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySun Dec 11, 2011 8:54 pm

Edited
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySun Dec 11, 2011 9:52 pm

Tornadic Impact - Still need to know the damage factor from this.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 12:47 am

Break bones, rip flesh, rupture organs etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 1:03 am

Well, don't say etc. Add in the damage you want, then bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyTue Dec 13, 2011 11:19 pm

Edited
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyWed Dec 14, 2011 12:12 am

Hei - Even though you have an armor with an ability, there is still room for him to have one more ability in his arsenal. With the numbing effect of the armor, how much of the body does it numb?

On a side note. Your templates are inconsistent and aren't spaced properly. Fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptySat Dec 17, 2011 12:34 am

Edited spacing and added a new jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyTue Dec 20, 2011 12:19 am

I still need to know how much area the chains numb when contacted.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyTue Dec 20, 2011 1:02 am

Six inches surrounding the impacted location.
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyTue Dec 20, 2011 1:54 am

Edit it in and I will move onto the Almighty S Rank
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PostSubject: Re: Wolves    Wolves  EmptyTue Dec 20, 2011 2:00 am

Onward to the S Rank!
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