The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Subject: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:04 am
Name: Kaze Shimasu (Wind Eruption) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Fuuton Type: Defensive Ninjutsu Range: Directly in front of user Description: Requires handseals. The user stomps on the ground, channeling and condensing a large amount of wind chakra into the earth and making it burst out of the ground in front of them not a second later. The wind takes the shape of a 5x5x1 (lxhxw) meter wall, with the capability of stopping any A-rank or weaker projectiles. This is possible due to the wind circumventing at such a rapid velocity within the wall, that it essentially dissipates any incoming ninjutsu, and sends solid weapons deflecting to anywhere but their original destination. This technique can also cancel out katon-jutsu of an equal rank, as the low-oxygen 'atmosphere' within the wall doesn't allow for continued combustion. [4 Post Cooldown]
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D Element: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close to medium range Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 feet Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Sun Aug 21, 2011 7:17 pm
Body Flicker - Make sure that this one is the approved version. 2500 ryo.
Tearing Earth Turning Palm - I need more than the basic description. How fast does it spiral in on itself? What is required to break from it? Jutsu like this are a bit too much in terms for site use, due to the auto kill nature. So you'll need to really dumb it down to site specifications. How much damage can it do if it crushes the enemy without killing them? It needs a cooldown. Let's handle this one before we tackle the A rank.
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:09 am
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some hampering of movement. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth.
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Let me know what you think of this, as it's more of a draft than anything else.
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:28 am
Actually, you out did yourself with how well its described. I like the system per rank, in which only the speed increases and not the damage dealt, which is fine. Maybe the only thing to clarify is a cooldown, and a percentage of the hampered movements from the hair line fractures. Once that is done, bump.
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:34 am
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)
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Added a cooldown and a stipulation saying that the attack can be stacked if the enemy is caught in it multiple times.
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:46 am
Seeing as Dominic relinquished the Eight Gates spot for the tertiary-taijutsu specialist, I will be purchasing the first two gates.
Spoiler:
Name: Eight Inner Gates Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: A Element: n/a Type: Taijutsu Range: self Description: The Eight Gates are eight specific points on a person's Chakra Pathway System. They limit the overall flow of chakra within a person's body. The basis for the idea of the chakra gates comes from the body's limits on the functions within it. This makes the body much weaker, but it keeps the body from expiring too soon. By opening these gates, the user can surpass their own physical limits at the cost of extreme damage to their own bodies.The state of having all Eight Gates open is known as Eight Gates Released Formation (八門遁甲の陣, Hachimon Tonkō no Jin; English TV "Eight Inner Gates Formation"). Any shinobi who activates this state will temporarily gain powers greater than a Kage, but they will die because of the damage done to their body. While the gates are active the use of taijutsu moves does not deplete the users chakra pool but they are limited to the use of up to two B rank or lower taijutsu per round or one A rank or above.
The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon), located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles allowing twice the normal strength of the body of the user. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.
The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energizes the body. Opening this gate allows the user to restore half of the overall chakra pool after it has been open for a round.
The Gate of Life (生門, Seimon), located on the spinal cord. Allows the user to use the Reverse Lotus. The increased blood flow turns the skin red. It allows the user to perform the Leaf Hot Wind.
The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the spinal cord. Increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.
The Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon; English TV "The Gate of Closing"), per above. Located in the abdomen.
The Gate of View (景門, Keimon; English TV "The Gate of Joy"), per above. Located in the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. Opening of this gate releases such large amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user.
The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon; English TV "The Gate of Shock"), per above. Located below the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger. Those who open this gate pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a green chakra coating. In the video games, allows the user to perform the Eternal Chaotic Dance. The aftereffects of opening the gate are that the users muscle fibers are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him.
The Gate of Death (死門, Shimon), located at the heart. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy. It makes the heart pump at maximum power and exceeds the power of every other gate. Opening this gate assures the user's death shortly after. (Must be S rank to open)
As each gate opens in addition to opening the use of each technique the user's power and speed are increased at a drastic rate, the actual rate is as follows:
In order to activate this jutsu it costs the normal amount for an A rank jutsu (40cp), to keep the gate you are using open you must pay 10cp per round however if you wish to open the next gate in line it will cost an additional 10cp (so on rounds where new gate is opened overall cost is 20cp). If the user falls to the point where they have no chakra left when the gates are disabled then they are subject to having their body seriously injured, how badly follows as such:
If the chakra pool ran out and you went up to the...
First Gate: No noticeable damage other than muscle soreness
Second Gate: Intense Fatigue, moves at half speed for three posts
Third Gate: Intense Fatigue, moves at half speed for five posts
Fourth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 500 words minimum)
Fifth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 1000 words minimum)
Sixth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 1500 words minimum)
Seventh Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 2000 words minimum)
Eighth Gate: Death, using the final gate will kill the user but they are free to use it until their chakra runs out.
The eight gates are treated as one jutsu for the technique limitation of a character, however each one of the eight must be bought individually, the prices for EACH gate are as follows:
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:05 am
Sadly no, you claim a spot by purchasing the first gate and your rank doesn't allow that. Though if you can rank up before someone else takes the spot it's yours
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)
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Added a cooldown and a stipulation saying that the attack can be stacked if the enemy is caught in it multiple times.
Ok, this is good to go.
Price now for this is 5500 ryo. However, due to you helping make the jutsu better, Ill allow you the old price at 4000 ryo. Thanks for the help in giving it more description.
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:07 am
Bumping as requested.
Name: Kaze Shimasu (Wind Eruption) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Fuuton Type: Defensive Ninjutsu Range: Directly in front of user Description: Requires handseals. The user stomps on the ground, channeling and condensing a large amount of wind chakra into the earth and making it burst out of the ground in front of them not a second later. The wind takes the shape of a 5x5x1 (lxhxw) meter wall, with the capability of stopping any A-rank or weaker projectiles. This is possible due to the wind circumventing at such a rapid velocity within the wall, that it essentially dissipates any incoming ninjutsu, and sends solid weapons deflecting to anywhere but their original destination. This technique can also cancel out katon-jutsu of an equal rank, as the low-oxygen 'atmosphere' within the wall doesn't allow for continued combustion. [4 Post Cooldown]
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)
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Added a cooldown and a stipulation saying that the attack can be stacked if the enemy is caught in it multiple times.
Dom, this is a C-S technique thus should be priced as a S-rank.
None of the damage changes to the enemy. The only thing that is different ie the user's ability to manipulate the earth a bit quicker, but no damage increase. Therefore, it didn't warrant a multi rank jutsu. The previous description of this jutsu was lack luster, and he helped tighten it up. The old description spoke of depending on the skill, the user could make it faster and it was C rank by itself and was approved at 4000 ryo. This just specifies it with text and leaves no room for god mod of the tech.
This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
How would you like to increase the damage? It basically pulls you down as the ground spirals inwards on yourself, either burying you alive or crushing you. He even stated that if he used it in a rock area it would cause more damage, possibly due to the fact that getting boulders on your head while you're getting pulled down is equal to getting stoned to death. So it's quite a deadly C-ranked Doton technique.
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Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
Here we get the the amount of time the enemy has to evade the technique. A regular technique would have the same time of evasion regardless of the user's rank, once the technique adapts itself to the user's rank it means that it's not a single ranked technique. The thunder dragons are getting stronger in your case, here the time of evasion is getting lower.
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If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)
Suddenly the technique is explained as a friendly C-rank that causes hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which decreases the movement by 10%, but as explained above it isn't innocent at all, if he used it in a rocky area you're killed.
If the technique had a steady speed regardless of the rank it would priced as a C-rank, but since it increases in speed as the user gets stronger it has to be priced higher. I understand your issue of making the tech stronger if we rank it higher. But it's like if you have a D-B that makes your punch go harder as you grow in rank and I have a D that makes my punch go faster as I grow in rank.
So if a tech is rank based, it is had to priced as a rank based tech up to the level it goes.
I understand your worry, but the first part plays no part into what the technique does. It was the old description and is just an overall summary of the technique from the Naruto Source. The actual technique itself and what it truly does is below that in the system he provided. In my opiniion, it still is only classified as C, due to the fact that it doesnt require any higher of a ninjutsu to break from it, but only with skill, does the quickness of the start occur and the hairline fractures still are the only damage that occurs.
Ill provide an example. The Water Dragon, since it was the first. The potency in which it is cast, depends on the skill of the user. However, it doesnt state that it does more damage, only the fact that how its cast varies between rank and water source. I assure you that this technique's intentions are only below the Description in which is only a summarization of the old description.
We can remove the first part of the jutsu if that is your wish to keep it C Rank. Lets not flood his Technique Topic
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Tue Aug 30, 2011 1:50 am
I didn't state that the attack was deadly, it was like that when I copied it from the Mirage database of Doton ninjutsu. The parts you have approved are the ones that I added.
Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: Earth Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10 meters Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:
Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade
If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)
Subject: Re: Uchiha Keiji [Technique Registration] Wed Aug 31, 2011 2:23 am
Uchiha Keiji wrote:
Bumping as requested.
Name: Kaze Shimasu (Wind Eruption) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Fuuton Type: Defensive Ninjutsu Range: Directly in front of user Description: Requires handseals. The user stomps on the ground, channeling and condensing a large amount of wind chakra into the earth and making it burst out of the ground in front of them not a second later. The wind takes the shape of a 5x5x1 (lxhxw) meter wall, with the capability of stopping any A-rank or weaker projectiles. This is possible due to the wind circumventing at such a rapid velocity within the wall, that it essentially dissipates any incoming ninjutsu, and sends solid weapons deflecting to anywhere but their original destination. This technique can also cancel out katon-jutsu of an equal rank, as the low-oxygen 'atmosphere' within the wall doesn't allow for continued combustion. [4 Post Cooldown]
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