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 Raijin

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Genin

Takeshi
Takeshi
Male Posts : 2435
Ryo : 20350

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue260/260Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 10:58 pm

Weapon Template

Weapon Name: Raijin (雷神; literally meaning "Thunder God")

Weapon Type: Katana

Quantity: One

Description: A long thin katana crafted from titanium and steel mixed together for a stronger alloy of both hardness and strength. The weapon is about four feet long including the twelve inch hilt.

Abilities:

NOTE: for these abilities to be used the wielder's primary element MUST be raiton {lightning release} otherwise they act only as a pair of extremely sharp pike-like swords

Storm Swim: The blade of this weapon is able to be coated in raiton style chakra which increases its cutting ability by more than three fold and allowing it to easily slice or "swim" through materials as hard as titanium with ease. For things deemed "unbreakable" Raijin could crack but not fully destroy them. Titanium and tempered steel take two posts to slice through. This ability takes one round to activate and lasts for three rounds before running out. After it runs out the user must wait for an eight turn cool down to recharge it.

History: A weapon crafted by Takeshi's own hands, he collected the finest and highest quality materials and melded them together with the help of his bloodline, however in the creation of the blade he used traditional methods of the forge so that he could more effectively embed it with raiton nature.

Appearance:

Spoiler:


Last edited by Takeshi on Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:42 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue330/330Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:11 pm

The only thing I see is maybe five posts being too long. Three seems more suitable. Unless you wanna take the hit of paying more for the extra two post usage.
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Takeshi
Takeshi
Male Posts : 2435
Ryo : 20350

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue260/260Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:14 pm

Not a major downgrade so I've edited it to only 3 rounds
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue330/330Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:24 pm

Ok. The last part. Since it can basically destroy another person's sword that isn't titanium, you should probably post the damage it does against an unbreakable weapon. Since there are a large number of them on the site. And to prevent OP, it takes two posts to destroy another persons weapon that is directly below titanium. First post reduces the opposing weapon's support, the second slices through it.
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Takeshi
Takeshi
Male Posts : 2435
Ryo : 20350

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue260/260Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:30 pm

Okay so for things deemed "unbreakable" Raijin could crack but not fully destroy them

and alright, so Titanium and tempered steel take two posts to slice through - thats fine with me
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue330/330Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:40 pm

Edit it into your description.

10,800 ryo.

(Tacked on an extra 300 ryo for the duration lasting 3 posts.)
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Takeshi
Takeshi
Male Posts : 2435
Ryo : 20350

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue260/260Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 11:52 pm

Edits made, I need a little more ryo but Ill buy this soon
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Genin

Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue330/330Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 12:05 am

Raijin L_6304c9b12bcc4973b2983df0b5a15af4

10,800 ryo
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Takeshi
Takeshi
Male Posts : 2435
Ryo : 20350

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue260/260Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 2:03 am

I'll take it now :D
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Seinin

Virtue
Virtue
Male Posts : 450
Ryo : 68700

Character sheet
Chakra:
Raijin Left_bar_bleue300/300Raijin Empty_bar_bleue  (300/300)

Raijin Empty
PostSubject: Re: Raijin   Raijin EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 6:09 pm

Ryo deducted.
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